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Take Me Higher



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Points: 1321
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Sat Oct 22, 2011 4:18 am
FadeWriter says...



Spoiler! :
I've never written a song before, so I hope it's okay. Without Music it's approximatly 3 min. 10 seconds long with 301 words.


(Lead in music begins.)

I’m lost in a shadow that I cannot see
Darkness surrounds me and icy regimes
My wings have all fallen, piece by piece
Get me out of your deadly love scene

Lead me home I’m dying
Give me silver wings
Lead me out of this whole mess
And I’ll get a hold of this place called “Home!”
(Lead me! Take me Higher! Lead me! Find me agian.)
Le-ad me. Out of here

(Insert intrumetal here.)

I’m drowning in your perfume of sadly fatal vain
I’m trying to hold on to all my sane
But I am slowly losing the thoughts in my brain
I’m looking for my home
and-I-am losing this game

Lead me home I’m dying
Give me silver wings
Lead me out of this whole mess
And I’ll get a hold of this place called “Home!”
(Lead me! Take me Higher! Lead me! Find me agian.)
Le-ad me. Out of here

(Insert intrumetal here.)

(Quick cut-off. Silence.)

Even if I fall from stars beyond this frozen point
I’ll live again but only if you stay
(Beat picks up slowly.) A path for only me to take, to make out of here
My fianl words,
My final act to crawl out from darkness! (extended)

Lead me home I’m dying
Give me silver Wings
Lead me out of this whole mess
And I’ll get a hold of this place called “Home!” (extended)
(Lead me! Take me Higher! Lead me! Find me agian.)
Lead me! Take me Higher! Lead me! Find me agian!
Le~ad me. Out of here. (Quick cut-off)

(Silence.)

Take me home I’m dying
Give me silver wings
Lead me out of this whole mess
(Beat starts up again.) And I’LL FLY AWAY FROM HERE.
WOOO OOO OH OOO OH OOOO OOOHH (3X)
OOOH OO OHH

TAKE ME HIGHER. (Quick cut-off)
  





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Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:25 am
SerenityCross says...



A word about you're spoiler.. This song is not
okay
it's FANTASTIC!!
I can toatally see this in the top 10 charts!
This song can make people cry and sing along at the same time.
All you have to do is find a band who can fit music to you're songs and you'll be making millions!
Keep singing! (and writing songs!)
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