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The Truth



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Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:47 am
skebe says...



It's time to open our eyes
And see what we've missed
The truth is not a lie unless the lie is that truth
We're about to forget what we have to believe
And all we can believe is the truth

-CHORUS-
The only truth is what you believe
And what you believe is always true
'Coz we're not happy, yet we smile
And we're not sad, but still we cry
Smiles appear through tears of joy
We must keep fighting on
For love, and for life

We open the door, even though it is locked
And get the keys for the future to come
We have to battle on to keep what we've got
And cry for everyone that we've lost

CHORUS

We keep our eyes on what we want
And we will never give up, until we get it
(Oooh... yeah yeah)
We can do want we want when there's no rules
And we know the punishment for our actions

Because,

CHORUS (x2)

The truth is only what you believe
And what you believe is always true...
-SKEBE
  





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Mon Oct 03, 2011 8:04 am
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harshita3chaarag says...



Hello.. You know I really like these lyrics.. Specially the Chorus.. And I love the word play In para 1 in the last 2-3 lines.. Its a bit confusing, yup, but fun to read.. I also like the central idea of the lyrics.. So this is a good piece of work.. Well done..
Harshita:)
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Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:49 pm
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TaylaChase says...



Wow, I really liked this :D I always wanted to write lyrics, but I could never get it right, so I admire you for being able to come up with such great lyrics:) Anyway, I really couldn't find anything wrong with it, although I don't really know how to critique lyrics, but anyway, I just wanted to say that I liked it :D

The truth is not a lie unless the lie is that truth
We're about to forget what we have to believe
And all we can believe is the truth


I really liked these lines, I thought it was interesting :D

The only truth is what you believe
And what you believe is always true
'Coz ['Cause] we're not happy, yet we smile
And we're not sad, but still we cry
Smiles appear through tears of joy
We must keep fighting on
For love, and for life


I also liked the chorus XD

And we know the punishment for our actions

This line just seemed a little awkward to me, but that could just be me.

The truth is only what you believe
And what you believe is always true...

I liked the ending, it seemed a suitable way to end a song XD

Anyway, so I basically just liked it all XD Good job :)

~Tayla
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