Young Writers Society

Wrote this one when I was hurt and down by the type of guy stated in the title, unfortunately I seem to attract those type of guys in general..oh well..at least I'll get more lyrics out of it P:

CASSANOVA

When I first met you sparks were flying,
Got me believing in love at first sight and
Star crossed lovers designing,

But They knew you better than I did,
Should’ve listened to their truths but I thought different,
Cos looking in those innocent eyes,
I just couldn’t believe there could be a devil in disguise,

Well darling, you proved me wrong.

When your head says no but your heart says go,
My conscience pulls me back and forth,
I say I can try but I know I can’t lie,
This is getting a little too much,
I’m fighting a losing battle,
Impossible to win
Thought I could look this over,
But you’re just another no good Casanova.

Back in those days,
We were young,
We were foolish and I was kinda scared,
But what’s it to you?
Just a kiss, just a touch,
Well honey I’ve got news for you,
I’ve never been hurt so much.

I was never at peace with your lies
Like every other time I tried.

When your head says no but your heart says go,
My conscience pulls me back and forth,
I say I can try but I know I can’t lie,
This is getting a little too much,
I’m fighting a loosing battle,
Impossible to win
Thought I could look this over,
But you’re just another no good Casanova.

Never cared, your mind was elsewhere,
But you kept me close,
Played me like a puppet,
You discovered my biggest weakness;
Loving you,
Yes, it was a long shot
And this was what I got.

You promised yourself you wouldn’t, I knew that I shouldn’t,
My conscience pulled me back and forth,
I said I could try but I knew I couldn’t lie.
It was all just a little too much,
I found myself fighting a losing battle,
Impossible to win
Thought I could just forget,
For you I could pretend,
But everything has to end,
Goodbye you Casanova you,
Don’t want to see you ever again.

Na na na,
Never see you again.

This is a good song, it seems to express your feeling toward someone you loved before, but then he hurt you.
This is a common feeling that you've express with an uncommon and creative way (in my opinion, writing is the best way to express feelings).

One thing I've noticed is that there is no chaging in the song, it always says the same (not the same words, of course, but the message is the same). For your next work, I would adivse you not to keep saying the same message over and over in different wording, most of the time and slightly different message in the end of the song can make it much more interesting and deep.

Anyway, nice work, keep writing =).