Young Writers Society

Verse 1
I wish
That life would always be like this
I wish
That I could have you with me forever
I wish
That this grass never gets cut
So that we would hide in it
Eternally, without anyone knowing

Verse 2
I wish
That the weather stayed cold like this
So you could hold me close and warm
I wish
That this place could be home
Where there’s no one,
Nothing
Where life’s distractions are locked out

Chorus
Do you wish the same thing, darling?
Do you see the future I see?
As we lay in these fields, baby
Don’t stop holding me
‘Cause I’m scared to fall away
And get you out of my reach,
By your side, I’ll stay
And make our wish come true.

Verse 3
I wish
That life wasn’t such a bitch
I wish
That time would just stop
And that we wouldn’t have to leave so soon
I wish
That we never had to part
And have to go our separate ways

Chorus
Do you wish the same thing, darling?
Do you see the future I see?
As we lay in these fields, baby
Don’t stop holding me
‘Cause I’m scared to fall away
And get you out of my reach,
By your side, I’ll stay
And make our wish come true.

Bridge
But it scares me,
Don’t let it haunt my every thought
I can see it coming
Down on us
Don’t let it
Terrorize me
I wish we could escape it
But I’m afraid we won’t make it
I wish, I wish…


Chorus x2
Do you wish the same thing, darling?
Do you see the future I see?
As we lay in these fields, baby
Don’t stop holding me
‘Cause I’m scared to fall away
And get you out of my reach,
By your side, I’ll stay
And make our wish come true.

And make our wish come true
And make our wish come true
And make our wish come true, baby.

End.

I loved that! Good song. Oh and i love your novels too. I love all the things you think of are great! all though i dont think i should have read that. lol! it was still good though. actually i didnt like it. I LOVED IT! Keep writing!


goofy

I really liked the lyrics and the mood they set- two lovers protecting each other through the 'bitch' that is life. The thing I like most is the chorus because I can really feel the rhythm in it and can imagine it in a song, if that's where you're going with it- and even if it never gets sung, the words sing themselves off the screen. They're very powerful together.
The verses don't sing out as much because their rhythms don't seem as strong. Some of the words don't seem as powerful either- for example if you add 'just' to a line, it makes it a bit weaker.
I really enjoyed these lyrics though, and I look forward to more!

I like this song. I don't usually review lyrics, and even though I have a voice like a cat being run over by a truck I tried to sing it in my own imaginative melody. Probably not the melody its meant to be sung by but oh well... I think it sounded really good. I love the idea of the whole thing, that its a couple wanting to run away from life and time and all that. But its nice to know that the person is also scared, and that is why she is singing the song.

I liked the lyrics a lot, and the repetitive I wish was cool ^^

Deanie x

<3 I already liked it, so I can't D: