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lele253isme wrote:(Verse 1)
When we first met (First met)
I didn't even know your name yet (Name yet)
I tried figure out every chance I got
Who is that boy who stole my heart
With a head nod (with a head nod)
He did it with a head nod
These last two lines are confusing. What exactly did he do with a head nod?
(Chorus)
But it was nothing, it was nothing
But playground love x3
I was nothing cause
It didn't last that
It didn't last that long
A first glance
Can be proven wrong
It didn't last that
It didn't last that long
A first glance can be proven wrong I like the repetition.
(Verse 2)
Ay
We were so young
I never would've thought it would endtodayI think you should take out that word.
You wanted more
Than I could ever give away
You stole my heart
Andyounever even gave it back It flows better without that word.
We're back at the start
How you gonna leave me like that?
(Repeat Chorus)
(Bridge)
How could I have been so crazy (Crazy)
I really thought you'd stay my baby This is my favorite line!
As soon as the moon hit the sky
You started to cry out your goodbyes
But I'm not gonna lie
I thought this would last
(Repeat Chorus)
You stole my heart
And you never even gave it back
We're back at the start
How you gonna leave me like that?
As soon as the moon hit the sky
You started to cry out your goodbyes
When we first met (First met)
I didn't even know your name yet (Name yet)
Okay, two things.With a head nod (with a head nod)
He did it with a head nod
I don't know if you were trying to say I or it, I personally like I better than it. It shows the reader how much you depended on something at such a young age.I was nothing cause
This is when you start to really lose the reader. How old are you, what happened today that made you feel like it could never end? And the questions just keep coming...Ay
We were so young
I never would've thought it would end today
What did he want? You see now how age plays an important role now?You wanted more
Than I could ever give away
I dont exactly know what you mean by this line.We're back at the start
Not to be mean...but I have no idea how these two lines play into this song. If he wanted to end it then why are you making it seem here like he's falling to his knees because he doesnt want to let you go? Plus, why is it night? Where are you? Is this night an important one for the two of you?As soon as the moon hit the sky
You started to cry out your goodbyes
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