I wrote this many years ago, and my song writing has improved since then. I realize there's a lot of spots that sound weird, and those were all courtesy of a younger me. This was the height of my song writing skills when I was younger and now it's not horrible but it's not good either. I figured I should post it since review day is coming up and I haven't posted anything in a while. Just please be nice:)
Here's the album art I made for it. I got the picture from Google and I edited it and added the words, so it's was only half made by me. The picture itself belongs Google. And I crossed out my name because I didn't want anyone to know it:)
And here's the song:
I remember the day we met
It had to be fate that we sat next to each other
Nothing special, but I'll always remember it
First sentence amazement
Greatness, skipping across the pavement
Not everything is love at first sight
But over time you just might, realize
Take me back to the time when we talked everyday
You always had your way
Of making me smile
My friends would tease
And you would just say, “Someday”
Take me back to the time I never wanted to leave
Being thrown by a hundred thousand bees
Would be better than losing you
Take me back to when everything was great
Easy as cake
Take me back, to when it was perfect
We became friends almost instantly
One of the fastest ever
Have you ever heard me say, “Please please?”
We would talk and talk all day
Never ending greatness
So I must say
There was another boy
But he would never compare to you
You always gave me the most joy
Talking, laughing, teasing, reading, joy
Oh I remember it all
Why did you have to make me fall?
Chorus
What happened between us is all just a memory
Fallen tears
No room for cheers
Let the river of my tears flow forever and ever
When you decided to hardly talk to me anymore
You were in love with this other girl
And I'll I did was get in the way
Oh, so to say
You broke my heart
Chorus
It's a while later and things are starting to change
I'm finding new ways
To numb the pain
New boys, a new life
I know I have more greatness
And I can easily leave you behind
Oh I shall find a new way
But sometimes when I'm lying in bed
Just before I retire my head
I think to myself
Chorus
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