Young Writers Society

veersies <33 this thread is bringing me such an indescribable amount of joy, you don't even know -- i just, all of them, sheer perfection, i love it. The winter song in particular made me super, super happy to listen to just now. ilu and i also love ur art <33

@ShadowVyper AHHH THANK YOU VYPSIES <3333 I'M GLAD TO KNOW UR ENJOYING IT IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY :,,((((

another song! we r bless'd ;-;

seriously, though, listening to the songs while reading your poem takes the experience from heavenly to godly, i-- they're so sad but beautiful at the same time, and makes me want to give you a hug while also somehow experiencing those same melancholy feels. you do a really good job of capturing those vibes and putting them into words

that for each minute we waste
another seems to go missing.

hecc dis gib me big feels, +10/10 amazing imagery, doin me a big enjoy <3333

@ShadowVyper :,,,((( thank u vypsies u make me feel appreciated AND IM GLAD UR ENJOYING THEY SONGS TOO <3333 love ur comments and ur input <333

Hey veeren!

I really enjoyed reading through your thread. I really like the poem "Fire". I think my favorite line from that one was "the only path i have is forward but / i only think of rewinding". I like the descriptions of light and warmth especially the tunnel line. I also love "Faded Sunlight"! It takes a really mundane and relatable moment and just describes it so simply and yey effectively. Really good job on that one. "Winter Interlude" is so good too. I love the last stanza especially.

Good luck with the rest of NaPo! I'll look forward to your new poems

@Charm AWWWW THANK YOU FOR READING THROUGH IT! i'm so happy you're enjoying them and thank you for the encouragement to keep going :,,)))