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25. a throne built of justice and mercy

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some build their thrones
atop the bones
of slaves and broken men
in compromise they are content
with darkness behind the curtain

but you expose
what you oppose
and drive out what you detest
on behalf of the oppressed:
the wickedness of evil men

in justice all that stands
against your righteous plans
will be crushed beneath
your holy feet
and you will reign

enthroned upon the mercy seat
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In this latest batch I think 21, 22, and 24 are some of my favorites. (I also really like poem 11 from the first page). And the song you posted for 22??! was absolutely gorgeous and expressive! Thanks for sharing these sound!
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26. dear sister

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This one's a little different - more indirectly on theme. I wrote this song for my sister today (it's her bday soon) and don't really have more creative energy to spare, so I'm counting this as today's poem.

Lyrics:

Years ago I saw you dancing
With wings on your back as you swayed
And that's still how I remember you
I love how you move while you pray

And I can see you shine
With the light of His hope in your eyes

And you're pushing forward
Though you can't see it now
There's a prize
As you're spinning onward
There's eternal rewards for your life
It's worth the fight

And I know sometimes it hurts to remember
Just how much everything's changed
But I know that there's still light in this
For all the pain he can exchange

And I can see you cry
As your friend Jesus does empathize
And I can see you smile
As he heals you in his perfect time

I believe he redeems your time
And right now you are his delight
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27. i see you and see the father

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the light of the the glory of God shines in your face
and whoever has seen you
has seen your father

and oh, how this changes everything
to know you and your father are one
you - always doing what you see him doing
to see you is to see the father
and in this i know
neither of you are out of reach

so when i read the words I've read over and over
that the father so loved the world that he sent you
i know both of you loved the world, and you were not forced
for this is the love of the trinity
made known to us
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28. a letter

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this isn't really a poem. it's more of a love letter of gratitude.
you've given me joy inexpressible. because of you i have
hope not just for today, or tomorrow, but for eternity. you've
given me something to look forward to that's more than just
the temporary little joys this life has to offer, and it's the
exceedingly great pleasures of knowing you as a king,
as a brother, as a friend. as a savior, redeemer
restorer, deliverer. as the one who brings justice on behalf
of the afflicted, and as the one who hears and responds
on behalf of the ones he loves. it's because of who you are
that i can live with joy and hope and expectation in my
heart. i can face tomorrow because you did. i can face
tomorrow because you accomplished what you meant to
on the ross: you made a way for me to be reconciled to
God our father so that i can live with you forever. and
because of this, there is no fear in death - because i know
just as you were risen from the grave, so will i be. and
when that day comes - when that day comes - i will weep
with joy, for i will get to see your face. the face of the one i love
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29. a friend

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I'm thankful that i have a friend
who i can trust
will care
no matter what i bring to him
he's listening
he's there
and even when i feel so week
and like i have no words
i know that i don't have to speak
and my heartache is heard
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30. friendship no man can equate

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I'm not fit to just list and longer
the numerous traits of your ways
somehow i need to find
more of you than my mind
even knows how to contain

i know that i don't understand it
everything 'bout who you are
but i'm longing to know
as you tell and you show
me so much more than i've seen this far

and with each passing day i am longing
to be closer and near to your heart
to be near as a friend
and fully comprehend
the depths of your love you impart

and i know that it might take a lifetime
but be rest assured that i will wait
it's a worthy pursuit
and there's no substitute
for friendship no man can equate
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31. dear brother

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Wrote another song, this one's for my brother who's bday is soon.

Lyrics:
(remember) when we played in our backyard
you told me that the leaves were edible
and then we rolled around in the grass and trampolines, incredible
how you would tell me lots of things just to get under my skin

a brother's choice of weapon is
a water gun and beanie baby bags
thrown over couches and chair forts
and boy, you knew just how to
push in the buttons that would make us scream and laugh and feel alive

bu then you grew
though you still tease us, you
are more than just a brother who's got jokes

your'e a man of wisdom
with a heart of gold
and i love the way you love so sincerely
and you've got someone with you
and he will uphold
you as he leads and guides you faithfully

(i see you) learning how to open up
to come to drink and let your cup
be filled up, by your father
your innocence being restored
as you bow down before the Lord
and he crowns you, you've been forgiven

and so you grew
and his love made you new
and I rejoice that by this blood you've been redeemed

and still you grow
as your heart comes to know
that he's more wonderful than you could dream

(and he's making you) a mand of wisdom
with a heart of gold
who loves just how he loves so sincerely
oh you've got someone with you
and he will uphold
you as he lead and guides you faithfully

and it's true
in his hands you are secure
it's true
forever he is holding you

this is the safest place to be
in his hands eternally
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32. there will be no goodbyes

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with you
there will be no goodbyes
once i see you
and look in your eyes
it will be forever -
not just with you and i
but together
with your church, your bride
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And, well, that's the end of it! Thanks to everyone who's read along with me and given encouragement and feedback - I appreciate all of it! <3
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I absolutely love this latest song dedicated to your brother. The way that you've interwoven this with your faith is beautiful. What's particularly poignant about that is I often read about people writing about their experience with faith (since it is so personal), but here I'm getting a bigger picture - which is to say, the picture of your love for God & your brother, and how those two both have very important roles in your life.


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Congratulations on making it to 30 sound!! 31 was really sweet and I think that poem 32 was a really sharp conclusion for the whole collection, and the short lines really help capture the drama of just what's being said too. These have been interesting but also in many ways encouraging to read this month. <3
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
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