I don't know many people who stick something through to the end when it takes some time (and I mean some time) for our broken relations to mend
for most of us our hope is feeble when years upon years pass by for someone to change (and I mean really change) when obligations don't apply
I'm guessing that's what amazes me when i look at the way that you wait consistent, persistent, and patient, sincere you're not spiteful as you illustrate
a faithfulness and a long-suffering forbearance and such great restraint i love that you're patient (oh so very patient) and kind to me without constraint
i don't know many people who stick something through to the end when ages pass by (generations pass by) and still have more grace to extend
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you were there when the heavens were made drawn out like a curtain // in emptiness laid creating and making and speaking your will made something from nothing with infinite skill i know it was you alone, thought of the clouds inventing what exists and what is allowed your father was watching and with you up there together, you making, with love that you share setting the boundaries of the waters, deep then carving the valleys and the mountains, steep you're the master craftsman // the father's delight day after day your face shining so bright oh how he took pleasure when things came to be you making mand and earth with him, the three he loves you, adores you, rejoices in song always in your presence and all the day long
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unashamed to call us brothers to welcome in fathers and sisters and mothers we didn't do anything that was desirable our morals fell shamefully short of admirable but you became like us with us for us chose us by your own design so we cannot say that we did something had something it was just you saying: you are mine
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from the beginning you were the word before there was sinning and humans had heard in that deep fellowship the three together the spirit, the son and the father forever the light of all mankind the one who made all things in the darkness he would shine as the king of all kings but who would believe him and who would understand humanity was dim their heads buried in sand but his light would shine through and pierce the dark curtain your light comes to pursue that is for certain
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really, really I haven't met someone else like you who's so genuine and kind with no hint of deceit or guile wholly, wholly trustworthy in all of your ways and all that you say can be counted on counted on as the days roll along you stay the same you mean what you say and you meant to do it's follow through
really, really i am overjoyed to know you if only just a glimpse for now but i see more and more and more
this is the pleasure i have for eternity being your friend and knowing you entirely
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I absolutely love your 20th Poem. I really liked that you placed a reference from the Gospel of John:))) and I take that the formatting was trying to show a B for the Bible? Oh my goodness, it's both poetic and stylistic.
Keep writing <3 Your poems are wonderful and God bless you!
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I'm not very good at the way that you love I've tried so hard to do it, my strength's not enough I don't think I'll understand it, Lord is this my fate? Or is this how you draw my heart to your to wait?
And it may take some time To figure out As you reveal yourself I learn about How you work differently Than I'd expect
You're so much better You're so much better
Day to day I'm learning the depths that you feel I thought that you were stoic but that's just not real Lord you made my emotions of course you have yours And I find that your emotions break down all my doors
And it may take some time To figure out As you reveal yourself I learn about How I work differently Than I'd expect But you're so gentle And you're so patient But you're so gentle And kind about it
And I am learning it's worth the pain As I let you in to ascertain The current state of my heart's affairs I trust and let you in there
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the father raises kinds and tears them down he's raised his son to weart the crown the final kind to rule the earth with righteousness for its rebirth justice will be the base of his throne and to every eye he will be made known
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Day to day I'm learning the depths that you feel I thought you were stoic but that's just not real Lord you made my emotions, of course you have yours
John 14:27: Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
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