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Fri Apr 06, 2018 6:30 pm
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bluewaterlily says...



Sorry Audy! I apparently need to review the rules xD
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 6:33 pm
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alliyah says...



Strawberry Games Entry: Not sure if both count, but this one has "give" and "forgiveness" heavy dreams & lofty responsibilities

Vanilla Games: Is this just end line rhyme or rhyme anywhere?
If it can be internal line rhyme I've got:
Spoiler! :

"forgiveness is"
"and I pretend my..."
"imagining ... upturning"
"and... head.... beaten"
"I give up my"

alternatively, if it can only be end rhyme - maybe the couplet ending in the words "bruised" .... and "expended" can count?

and if we're counting any old words that sort of rhymes anywhere in the poem:
pretend, effect, beaten, expended
beg, rage
against, current
finally, energy
stars, unfamiliar, before, underwater, waters, fingers


Chocolate Games Entry: something
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than dark cyan.


  





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 7:13 pm
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SnowMonkey says...



Vanilla Games: My latest poem has many rhymes
Sinking in an Hourglass
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 8:09 pm
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ellasnotebook says...





my poem has a few rhymes in it!
my guess for the chocolate games is "never"
with love ((;
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 8:10 pm
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Querencia says...



My time has come!! :D I decided to give solivagant v a rhyme scheme so it’s perfect for the vanilla games.

For the chocolate games, I’m going to guess "light".
>Previously Falconer<

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Fri Apr 06, 2018 8:57 pm
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Aley says...



I had ears and tears which rhyme Aley's Amazing Atrocities

My guess is "come"
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 9:23 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



hollow has a rhyme scheme!

And my word for the chocolate games is "fall."
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 10:14 pm
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Cadi says...



AH! I totally have a rhyme scheme for April 5! Hopes and Fears of a Sleeping Dragon
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 1:50 am
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fraey says...



A couple parts of this rhymes, but it's not a full rhyme scheme, and uh the last two lines of this rhyme. Not sure if those meet the requirements though XD.

Chocolate guess is truth
farewell, once, amidst a wave.
castle grounds consultant of the court
  





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Sat Apr 07, 2018 5:03 am
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Rosendorn says...



April 5 has "given" (if that counts) and a rhyme (care/there) here
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Tue Apr 10, 2018 8:25 am
Hattable says...



do 'eternity' and 'symphony' rhyme? cosmic lattes and other exotic coffeehouse specials
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Tue Apr 10, 2018 11:50 am
Aley says...



Sorry @Hattable but no. The end vowels very. Eternity is a nih-tee and symphony is an ah-knee.
  





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Tue Apr 10, 2018 5:30 pm
Hattable says...



Okay, I dunno how rhymes work, lel-- thanks though!
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 12:09 pm
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StellaThomas says...



Are the games over? :(
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 1:30 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



Oh no what happened to the games?! :(
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