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Sat Apr 21, 2018 11:52 pm
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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Apr 23, 2018 1:34 am
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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Apr 23, 2018 2:23 am
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16.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:35 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Tue Apr 24, 2018 2:37 am
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17.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:36 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Tue Apr 24, 2018 3:18 am
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18.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:36 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:04 am
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19.

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Wed Apr 25, 2018 3:25 am
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20.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Apr 25, 2018 8:53 pm
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21.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Apr 26, 2018 3:17 am
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22.

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Thu Apr 26, 2018 3:13 pm
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23.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Apr 26, 2018 3:17 pm
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24.

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Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:28 pm
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25.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:25 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:45 pm
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26.

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Sat Apr 28, 2018 8:43 pm
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27.

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Sat Apr 28, 2018 8:50 pm
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Sonder,
your NaPo threads is one of my favorites! There are so many intriguing lines and thoughts in here. 23 feels very honest, easy to relate to. Really enjoy the word choice in 20. And I can't quite figure out what 27 means, but gosh it's intriguing - especially those last 5 lines, "and i wonder if the only reason why we / worship / moons / is thanks to / stolen glory."

Somehow your whole thread feels really cohesive and written in one voice even though you have great variety in the formatting and don't always use the same emotions or themes. There's this thread on continuity. Well done! And good luck finishing your last few poems! :)
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than dark cyan.


  








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