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journey

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Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:59 am

Sonder says...

crossing thresholds-

(this world is wide and wonderful)

2015
2016
2017

Goal: 30 poems by the end of the month. Preferably, one per day. Comments welcome, but conversations are for walls/ PMs. Thanks for reading!

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Mon Apr 02, 2018 3:42 am

Sonder says...

1.

Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Tue Apr 03, 2018 3:26 am

Sonder says...

2.

Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:50 pm, edited 3 times in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:47 am

alliyah says...

Sonder! I really like these first two pieces. Your formatting is so neat and polished and the word choice is somehow just the right blend of academic/scientific and poetic.

This phrasing was beautiful:
"you gesture vaguely to the turbid galaxies roiling above overwhelmed"
I love how nonchalant that is and yet the turn to "overwhelmed" at the end.

you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now

but i have promised to return

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Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:28 am

Sonder says...

3.

Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:19 am

Sonder says...

4.

Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:54 pm, edited 2 times in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sat Apr 07, 2018 6:12 pm

Sonder says...

5.

Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:22 pm

Sonder says...

6

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:05 am

Sonder says...

7.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:45 am

Sonder says...

8.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:28 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:21 am

Sonder says...

9.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:29 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:41 am

Sonder says...

10.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:30 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Fri Apr 20, 2018 8:35 pm

Sonder says...

11.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:31 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:10 pm

Sonder says...

12.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:32 am, edited 2 times in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

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Sat Apr 21, 2018 12:27 am

Sonder says...

13.

Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:33 am, edited 1 time in total.

"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau

1, 2, 3

This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot