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Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:59 am
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Sonder says...



crossing thresholds-
(this world is wide and wonderful)

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2015
2016
2017

Goal: 30 poems by the end of the month. Preferably, one per day. Comments welcome, but conversations are for walls/ PMs. Thanks for reading!
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau
  





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Mon Apr 02, 2018 3:42 am
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1.

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau
  





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Tue Apr 03, 2018 3:26 am
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2.

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:50 pm, edited 3 times in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:47 am
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alliyah says...



Sonder! I really like these first two pieces. Your formatting is so neat and polished and the word choice is somehow just the right blend of academic/scientific and poetic.

This phrasing was beautiful:
"you gesture vaguely to the turbid galaxies roiling above overwhelmed"
I love how nonchalant that is and yet the turn to "overwhelmed" at the end.
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than
dark cyan.

  





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Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:28 am
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3.

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:19 am
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4.

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:54 pm, edited 2 times in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau
  





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Sat Apr 07, 2018 6:12 pm
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5.

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Last edited by Sonder on Fri Apr 27, 2018 8:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau
  





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Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:22 pm
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6

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau
  





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Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:05 am
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7.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:45 am
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8.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
~Thoreau
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:21 am
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9.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:29 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:41 am
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10.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:30 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 8:35 pm
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11.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:10 pm
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12.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 12:27 am
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13.

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Last edited by Sonder on Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:33 am, edited 1 time in total.
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination."
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