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all the thoughts you wish weren't real



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Wed Apr 25, 2018 12:51 am
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niteowl says...



Poem 14

i wish i could have written
the words that flow out of me
like blood out of a wound.

i wish i did not fail,
but i have,
and so this is my apology.

Yeah, so I'm not going to try to catch up on NaPo. I've had the time but not the motivation. I might write a few more poems, but I'm not going to try to reach 30. My head's just not in this game anymore.
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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Cadi says...



I'm glad you've written some poems, even though you're not going to go for 30! The way I see it, any poems at all is basically a success. And I've enjoyed following the ones you've posted :)
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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary.
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