I really like the rhythm that you had in the first two stanzas of poem no. 2! I can't wait to see what else you'll write during the rest of the month!
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Snowmonkey! This thread is my first introduction to your poetry and I'm honored to read through these. I liked how you introduced your background and nickname. I smiled whilst reading these, not just from the careful attention to meter and rhythm within these pieces, but they all have some message and some kind of underlying idea they want to express so I love that!
I liked Midnight Rider best, it is silky smooth and the flow and use of imagery really captures that tension, that spooky feeling and that sense that the horse is galloping after you as you read. However, I also enjoyed Sticks and Stones for the really unique message and twist on the common saying. These are some cool poems here!
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