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Nobunaga's Hideious Attempt at Poetry



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Sat Apr 07, 2018 12:11 pm
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Cadi says...



Nobunaga wrote:
cold nights in an empty bed


i hold my hands
too close to the heater
it burns
but i am more afraid of shivering


Oh, I like this one!

All of your stuff is wonderfully concise. And your one for almost forgetting made me chuckle - I usually have a good few like that by the end of NaPo :D
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Sun Apr 08, 2018 4:30 am
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Nobunaga says...



untitled garbage


mid-sentence, hushed by
your rose-petal lips. i
can hardly believe you
stuck around

i know that i'm
far too angry, why
do you choose
to stay

how patient can you be?

will you leave when i
reveal everything that i've
been hiding from you
from the start

will you leave when i
can no longer keep together my
mask, im running
out of tape
Last edited by Nobunaga on Mon Apr 09, 2018 2:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Be the butthole" - Lareine, 2018
  





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Mon Apr 09, 2018 2:39 am
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Nobunaga says...



wow i've been so unproductive and uninspired. i only have time and energy for a haiku. i gotta do better next week with my participation! i've just been trying to get accustomed to this schedule >.<

go get that get right, mama


i wish i could be
just like you, never needing
anybody else


inspo used: go gina
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Tue Apr 10, 2018 1:40 am
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Nobunaga says...



man vs wild vs good vs evil


how will you protect
your land from those who are just
trying to survive


inspo used: princess kaguya
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 2:05 am
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Nobunaga says...



no one mourns a nameless boy


call us everything
except what our mother's would -
that way, it's easy
"Be the butthole" - Lareine, 2018
  





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Fri Apr 13, 2018 2:24 am
Nobunaga says...



turn on the spotlight;
i don't care if it burns me
i've learned to love pain


these are getting crappier by the day lol
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 10:33 pm
Nobunaga says...



i know this with certainty, i will be the end of me

mortality grips
my throat; i will slice it off
before it chokes me
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 3:26 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



I really like 'untitled garbage' and 'cold nights in an empty bed' c: I like your style! *sends motivation and ideas for more NaPo*
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