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Nobunaga's Hideious Attempt at Poetry



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Mon Mar 19, 2018 12:33 am
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Nobunaga says...



I'm only making this in hopes that it will force me to participate this April...

poems:


Last edited by Nobunaga on Mon Apr 16, 2018 10:36 pm, edited 8 times in total.
"Be the butthole" - Lareine, 2018
  





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Sun Apr 01, 2018 6:34 am
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father forgive me, for you know that i am always sinning


i gather my tears
in my palms, cradle oceans
just so i can drown


Last edited by Nobunaga on Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:26 am, edited 2 times in total.
"Be the butthole" - Lareine, 2018
  





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Sun Apr 01, 2018 4:37 pm
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manilla says...



Aw :( That was so sad!
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sun Apr 01, 2018 5:52 pm
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Nobunaga says...



/finger guns/
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Mon Apr 02, 2018 11:35 pm
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there are things sadder than you and i. some people do not even touch.


my devils have taken dominance over me

sent me sprawling from the tree

to lay upon a muddy bank

and call your name

ask for a change in my wretched soul

/

for i fear i've fallen too far for forgiveness

like paradise is a bird's nest

and i'm clawing at the branches from below

bloated with pride and far too bold

/

raging until the sun dips into the sea

and everything becomes as black and blue as me

fighting off the worst of my shame

/

but now divine's too high for me to reach

you haven't even offered up your wings

/

and, yet, i love you still


inspo used: There are things sadder
than you and I. Some people
do not even touch.
Sonia Sanchez
Last edited by Nobunaga on Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:27 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Tue Apr 03, 2018 9:46 pm
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manilla says...



Keep writing. I like this ^^
i can't encourage people oh my goddd
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Wed Apr 04, 2018 12:04 am
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Nobunaga says...



killing bill


anger wells inside,
bubbling hot, angry in the hollow
of my throat. i fear
it will quench if i swallow

so i let it corrode.
let it burn away everything
i will not say, instead
my blade will speak for me


inspo used: kill bill vol. 1
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:06 am
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nobody looks like what they really are


i keep idealization tucked in
my hollow, cavernous chest
wrapped in brittle bone
and gristle

i wonder
when i will cave in
spilling truth onto my face
i know, one day, i will break my vows

i know, one day, i will end it all


inspo used: the ocean at the end of the lane, neil gaiman
Last edited by Nobunaga on Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:29 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:12 am
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StuckOnEarth says...



Whoa...this is really good! :D
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:15 am
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manilla says...



You have a good knack for poetry! Would you like me to review them here for no charge except your soul ?

I like them. They're dark, but I reallllly like them. :smt003
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:18 am
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Nobunaga says...



Yes @manilla ! I'm kinda just winging it lol so if you have any reviews for me I would love to hear them!

And thaaaank yooooou @SpaceSnickerdoodle
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:37 pm
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cold nights in an empty bed


i hold my hands
too close to the heater
it burns
but i am more afraid of shivering
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 4:27 am
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Nobunaga says...



excuses


i almost forgot
to post today. forgive me,
i am so tired
Last edited by Nobunaga on Mon Apr 09, 2018 2:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 4:50 am
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Evander says...



Today's poem was very riveting. :P
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Sat Apr 07, 2018 5:15 am
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Nobunaga says...



Lol xD I had like 30 minutes before 12 >.<
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