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Memories Fading Into Words



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Sat Apr 07, 2018 2:11 am
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alliyah says...



I like that you're exploring different formats for poetry writing Kanome! [I like mixing up the paragraph and line-break poems sometimes for fun].

Some of the thoughts in your poems are told quite simply/directly, but the emotional layer is deep I believe. (Like in "Heal", "Trembling", and "Escape" especially).

This stanza in particular stood out as feeling like there was much behind it.

Freedom is never near
I just want to forget the ones I thought I held dear
I will escape from you
So you can feel pain like I do


Keep up all the lovely writing! I will look forward to continue to see where your poetry endeavors take you. :)
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than dark cyan.


  





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Sun Apr 08, 2018 12:31 am
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Will someone ever come?
Falling down into the abyss, waiting for someone to come. Will someone ever come? A question always asked, but no answer. Tears fall, heart is breaking. A faded smile upon the face. Will someone ever come? Seems like loneliness is a real thing. Pitch black, nothing around. Will someone ever come?
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Sun Apr 08, 2018 12:44 am
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when chocolate milk is all you can think about
Chocolate is rich,
Especially chocolate milk,
Who doesn’t love it?
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Mon Apr 09, 2018 4:56 am
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Untitled 2

Blood dripping from your cuts, pain worsening inside. Heart breaking, alone in darkness.
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Mon Apr 09, 2018 4:58 am
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Untitled 3

One can be determined by fate, but one cannot be determined by chance.
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:04 am
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Life is worth it when you appreciate it

Holding the essence of life, cradling every piece until the end of time.
Lights flicker within the darkness, wanting to be free.
Life being held on, warming inside one’s heart.
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:06 am
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358/2 Days

The taste of ice cream, sweet and salty
The sight of the sun, warm and comforting
The laughter of others, bonds and friendships
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:21 am
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Demon Inside
Heart shattering wounds, internal blood raging
Eyes bloodshot, hands turning into claws
Being turning into darkness, light fading away

Demon inside wanting to burst, wanting to kill
Wanting to prey, to hunt
It looks at you, your flesh, craving more.
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:22 am
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Vanilla is the best flavor in the world because it is my favorite and y'know stuff

What is vanilla?
Sweet? How about delicious?
Best flavor ever.
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 4:13 am
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Returning from a fading memory
Forgotten days, a fading memory
Don’t know why I am here,
Wanting to be whole.
Craving a heart, what are feelings?
But now I must go back,
To the person who knows,
The answer to who I am,
The answer to where I belong.
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 4:15 am
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Did I really just talk about jumping?

Going really high,
Dropping back to the ground,
Oh, I just jumped.
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 4:18 am
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A mother's first thoughts
Holding them tightly in her arms,
Giving them tender kisses on their foreheads,
Holding them close, loving them at first sight,
The sounds of coos, the sounds of cries,
The touch of their skin ever so soft,
That moment where they see her for the first time,
Bring a warm smile upon her face.
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 4:20 am
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Craving the wonderfulness of Hot Cheetos

Hot cheetos are best,
The spicy taste is best,
I just want them now.
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Sat Apr 14, 2018 4:27 am
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Friday the 13th: Jason's killing wonderfulness

Blood dripping from their fingertips,
Zooming out, seeing a blood-stained machete,
Seeing a man, wearing a hockey mask
Ki Ki Ki, Mah Mah Mah
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Sat Apr 14, 2018 4:28 am
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Most random poem ever

Kisses and hugs,
In love with the bed bugs
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'They are afraid of nothing,' I grumbled, watching their approach through the window. 'Together, they would brave Satan and all his legions.'
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights