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Thu Apr 12, 2018 3:48 am
soundofmind says...



EIGHTEEN
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 10:44 pm
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alliyah says...



Sound, I think I'm just now having a chance to read through your NaPo thread additions and you have some really wonderful pieces here. I'm especially a fan of seven, ten, sixteen, nineteen, twenty-three and twenty-four! Even some of those short ones really pack a punch. You are really good at taking a very specific feeling and describing it in an original/imaginative way. And there are just some great lines all around - like the idea of dna circling around the universe, or pinching your nose to drown out the sound of rain!

Thanks for sharing your poetry! I'm excited to continue following what you write. :)
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Wed Apr 18, 2018 11:15 pm
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soundofmind says...



@alliyah omg! thanks so much!! <3 <3 I'm glad you like some of the stuff, haha
  





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Fri Apr 20, 2018 3:05 am
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rosette says...



Oooh, that's so pretty! It's light and free and the formattting is perfect. I love. <3
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