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april poetry



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Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:50 am
Aley says...



I think the Cantaloupe poems are interesting, but the second one feels a little disjointed.

I love how visceral and exact they are about what you want them to say. You don't beat around the bush at all, which I like a lot. I just wish I understood what "The School" was so I would understand the reference to the plot of it.
  








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