i realized i loved you when i tucked my nose into my shirt and i smelled you there, my skin still flushed from your touch i can still taste you when i close my eyes my hands grasp at the air and i long for the pressure of your arms around me the last night i spent with you, i told you there was no sound more beautiful than your heart and at night, i lie on my back and i stretch my fingers out and i remember the feeling of your pulse as i dug them into the hollow of your throat, your eyes sighing words your lips couldn't form
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then." - Lewis Carroll
i crave adventure in the great wide somewhere and when i ask for adventure, i ask for it all i want the pain and the sorrow i want to fight the big fight, to face danger head on give me a sword and shield let me lead the pack front line, straight into battle i am not your damsel in distress or the knight in shining armor you've been waiting for i am the warrior you were warned about
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then." - Lewis Carroll
I love the strength of the last line but "crave" feels a bit weak for it. All in all, I think the story this introduces is great and I really want to see the rest of the epic this started. Just keep writing
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