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Wed Apr 05, 2017 7:49 pm
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Brigadier says...



just one more poem and i swear i'll get back to work

death by pastry
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LMS VI: Lunch Appointment with Death

  





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Thu Apr 06, 2017 6:31 pm
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version 3 of galaxy that i meant to post on april 3
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Fri Apr 07, 2017 12:41 am
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really like the poems i wrote in the jam tonight
the picture inspiration for reference
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it was here for just a short moment
time fleeting through some sort of 
warp

the particles slipped away from the stem
leaving the wind only being able to brush
against my lips, leaving me in a state of 
only one thing, memories

it was just a brief moment in between chaos
but the fluffy seeds flying away from the dandelion
just stuck with me in some short-lived fantasy

the feeling was only momentary
the memory just resting gently
the whole affair, just a brief spot
on a complicated timeline

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Fri Apr 07, 2017 12:44 am
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i look out at the kids on the lawn
twiddling away their days like there's forever gonna be a tomorrow
i long for those days that were once in my mind
when i was totally oblivious to the world taking place outside of my head

naturally we filter things out and let our parents filter things out
until we're left with no filter to think about things with
is this good?  or is it bad?  or will i fall into some deep, dark pit somewhere?

i think maybe i want to go back since that's where i left you
stranded in the pit of despair, in some lonely southern nowhere
all the things that cross my mind now, hit me like a ton of something
was it the right decision?  was it the wrong decision? 
                                            should i have let them make an incision?

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Fri Apr 07, 2017 12:48 am
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yeah this is a bit personal but i like it

how am i so young in your eyes, that i can't possibly control my emotions?
do you think i haven't been through this, one, two, three, four times before?
i have so many questions for you but yet you shut me out and pretend like
i don't know what kind tensions are growing or why you're nearly beating each 
other up?
am i not the one who cleans the blood off the floor from the fights that go on in this family?
am i not the one who stitches up all the things that need to be fixed?
whether they will be the buttons on coats or the cuts under eyes of words gone wrong
am i not the one who eavesdrops behind the stair, waiting for things to calm so i can straighten the hair of the family wig

please tell me once again, how this isn't my responsibility and how i should walk away
please tell me once again, how much you struggled while living your rich put up life
please tell me once again, how much of a bi*** you like to be while i wrestle to keep the family together
because i'd really like to hear your excuses just one more time
sweetheart

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Fri Apr 07, 2017 12:58 am
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it started out about supernatural but i don't really know where it went from there

the flamingo knows how to fight the fairies
fighting is what we do best
light powers against the dark that strike us down
am I ready for another round it hell 
maybe but maybe not, we'll just have to see
i like to fight the fairies and the flies
not you, why can't you see that
got to go now, guess i scared you away
on my own now, like i always have and always will be

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Fri Apr 07, 2017 5:20 pm
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our world
Wide and vast and ever-expanding, it's
our place in the solar system to hide and
rest away silently from the extraterrestrials
living right outside our
door to outerspace

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Sat Apr 08, 2017 4:20 pm
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if i had one day

For one day, I'd like to be happy and free
of these chains that are sort of holding me
I'd like to dance on clouds, with honey bees
and darling, it would just be you and me

We'd be away from the sickness and sadness
traveling far from their regret-fullness
I'd just like that one last day to be the best
And sit like a bird in a tree using leaves for a nest

I'd be sitting under the sun by the sea
one last day of fun, just for you and me
And we'd be lounging in the sand for one last time,
and it would be just you and me

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Sat Apr 08, 2017 5:09 pm
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this half follows the tune to 'sweet betsy from pike'

Have a
song or poem or something, about candies and fantasy places, that neither you nor him nor I can reach. It’s a place beyond imagination and even perhaps beyond damnation, if you think that kind of thing exists. It rests far from here, high in the sky with bubblegum clouds and sugar sweet eyes. Just think of it as your lover true, it’s heaven to me and it’ll be heaven to you. Remember though before you the trip, it’s a one way travel with no way back. It’s the place where childhood dreams will met, with the harsh, harsh colds of reality. I see it as grim but many a man, has seen as an escape from this land. We’re out in the desert and out in cold and we’re out on the plains where the buffalo roam. Many a people want to escape, but please mister, don’t make that mistake. I’d like to make it one day but alas you can only journey, make up your mind before it’s too late, for then for your soul, satan wait. These dreams aren’t real, you know you’re slipping away, only gonna be your guardian for long so don’t make a mistake. Go away, go away, go away now and into heaven your soul will be allowed. But if you’re not peace with the lord, one can only hope for so much of a dream world.

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Sun Apr 09, 2017 2:09 am
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alliyah says...



Hey there! I just discovered I had somehow not read most of your poems yet for NaPo, and I love the variety you have here as well as the imaging pairs and interesting formatting you're doing in some of these. I have to say I really enjoyed the "kite" poem and love the galaxy one as well (especially those first 3 lines!) Beautiful work so far, I'll be curious to see what other areas you explore. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
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Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:51 am
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I'm not really a poetry person and this is only my second year, so don't expect too much exploration into poetry styles.

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Sun Apr 09, 2017 10:30 pm
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the saga of the missing Easter eggs

always someone different
always someone who isn't quite right
some just stray a bit from the pack
and half peek from under the bushes,
where they have been set

and that is the saga of the lonely and lost
and on the back of milk carton
missing easter eggs

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Mon Apr 10, 2017 6:29 pm
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*slaps monopoly money down on the counter*

A dusty and old cowboy came into the bar
and without a whisper or a crow,
other men started to go
For they knew this man and they knew him well
and nobody wanted to deal with old drinkin' joe
He sat down and flipped through some bills
before throwning em onto to the table
while the gunslingers all ran for the hill
Joe turned to the man behind the bar
and said with a rusty and grumpy start

I'll take this spot, bar keep
you don't need to serve me a drink
I'll just let my horse take a sleep
and head on over to that new fangled ice rink

But if you're serving, I'll take a shot of that whiskey
that causes men to say things like
The moon is nothing but a hundred moths,
about to take flight into a starry night
Them boys don't know what they're chatting about
cause I can come up with prettier words that that
I'd call that midsummer's night eve
something more like old Bill's dream

And he went on a talking bout all these things
People started a listenin' and getting real keen
it seemed old joe wasn't quite as bad as they said
for he had alot of knowledge in his old drunken head
Just sitting there at the bar with the rest of the guys.
six rounds were bought, five by one particular guy
he never paid a cent that night, cause everybody was distracted
by his talks of breaking into the mint

Now it seemed that Joe was a con man from far outta town
originally a gambler from a sunny ocean town
and he knew how to talk and make people listen
walked down the street and ladies would whistle
but he moved out west, to get away from gamblin'
and instead took rest as a gun slinging, hill billy, singing man

He took up the stage and took off his shoes
and headed on over to play some pool
Picked up the waitress with just one hand
and said
Boys get together and form a band
just a couple more people and we'll be ready to jam

That's how whole town got up to stand
and took a place in Old Jim's band
Mike was playing on the bold banjo
and Tom and Rob were ready to rock and roll
Said to all the passerbys, why you taking a stroll

Jim played the silver harp and Susy sang her part
and the whole saloon, was jamming to Old Jim's tunes
Rocking around the clock, to the drunken old man's hymns
And that's how the foggy bar's nightly band began

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