we formed this globe together always with others we found our forms you were magma too hot to touch, unstoppable i was atmosphere insubstantial, transient
you formed the earth ever lasting, constant, firm i was the water ever changing, healing
then we saw life i felt your joy i know not where from but you were close and i knew we would touch again
we found forms with which to speak strange sounds that meant everything
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You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014
I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights
Loving these. So many epic things happening. Number 3 is so delightful in its simplicity, it passes be me like a breath and I just want to read it over and over. The Chronicles of atoms i I especially liked how it harkens back to the creation story and the sort of beginning of days/beginning of love feeling, a great opener to this thread! I really felt that pang of despair too in the last two lines especially.
when you're leaving for the last time and see nobody home make sure to leave a message in the crack in the wall where we sold our souls you know i'll find it there when looking for all i love
dearest you were never meant long for this world we knew this when you played a note and cried you saw life in the music i saw only you beauty was everywhere
the morning star took my soul without a care i was one of his own from a start he entrusted you to gabriel for you only see life
i am always home
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014
I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights
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