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Sat Mar 19, 2016 3:49 pm
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idk what to put here, so i'll just claim my spot.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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1/30

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when i first met you
the feeling took flight
silky yellow,
blush pink wings
in the palm of my hand.

the feeling was warm
a burning knife through skin--
you told me that i was like the dead sea,
"you'll never sink when you're with me".

darling, if only you knew
my bones and how your
fingertips stained my skin,
and how
your smile could be a memory, made from the finest lights--
faded in the morning.

they say that letting somebody in,
exploring the darkest regions of your soul
could make a coward run away. when i met you
i thought different-- how wrong was i.

even after you disappeared
like smoke
your kisses will linger
like a spark, grow into something more.
i'll never forget and
you'll never remember.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sat Apr 02, 2016 5:07 am
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2/30

they say,
even the smallest amount of sunlight
can break apart a storm.
and how dreams can mend
a broken window.

the shallow feeling you might get
when looking through glass,
echoing your move with sharp claws--
it preys on the soul,
teeth dug deep into flesh.

they say,
broken bones heal
but what about hearts? do they
continue beating or do they
just stop?

mend it together with glass

rip, rip, rip
echos off the heart

please be careful

they say,
even the caged birds
often fly away.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sat Apr 02, 2016 6:02 pm
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Pompadour says...



Steggy! Me partner in this catawumpus! I love the images you've got rolling here, and your word choice is really lovely ('silky yellow' in particular is something that stuck with me). What I like here is that both the poems are like garden paths, and the reader comes to sit on the same rock he started out at, which is a very nice feeling.

Keep going! Hit me up on chat and we'll get writing for this week. XD
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3/30

Red Ladybugs

The red ladybugs move around my window,
attached to the warmth of the sun. I never understood that.
On the cloudy days, they moved away, flying
in a swarm to a different part of the house. Sometimes they
fly around the light in my bedroom.
Often times they swarm around my light bulb
blocking out the thoughts and wishes--
dreams and wants. Sometimes even my
love.

They fly and fly, ignoring the world. Sometimes
I pick these red ladybugs up and wonder
what are they thinking? Wingless giants? A fleshed mirror, broken
and scarred? I let them land on my finger, drifting on a summer dream--
completely free and forever alone.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sun Apr 03, 2016 7:30 am
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Just thought I'd drop by and say that your poetry so far is all very lovely. Very nice imagery. So, keep it up! *cheers in support*
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4/30

the warmest time of the year
can be the coldest,
the flowers will die, turning to an
ungodly brown. the trees converge,
their bones
crunching under my feet.

the warmest time of the year
can have storms,
with blinking flashlights out back and
screaming matches in the kitchen.

the warmest time of the year
can have holding hands,
souls linked together like a
school fence. we used to run
away from the flowers, not wishing to
die young, only now to float on our backs
like the petals down a summer river.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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5/30

they say to heal a wound
you need to stop touching it. i say different
a wound is something you need to nurse, drinking the
alcohol i give -- acting like my neighbor.
i care for the wound like a baby
dressing it,
protecting it
and then it cries.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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6/30

My mom has always forced me into getting a job. The small kinds
where you forget everything in the morning, but the
pain of yesterday still hangs on your back. I keep telling her
I want something different, something to change the world and not
cause stress-- it sounded so simple.

Down the frayed rope, my mother and I tried (and failed) to seek the job I wanted. My small tan feet ached by midday,
climbing and walking through endless tunnels of doubt. My mother wasn't changing--
her eyes glowed brighter within the day,
they warmed me in the darkest of place (one being the tunnel) and I realize,
my dream job was in front of me.

An old man sat in front of a store door, with a serpent smile and evil blue eyes. He said,

"I admire people who choose to shine
even after the storms they've been through."


His fingers curled around my bones-- puppeteer. Moving sudden parts,
speaking things I've left unspoken. Begging, he finally let me go. My mother was still there, watching from afar with something hiding in her eyes--
was it hate? hope? I didn't know.

"I really just want to be
the warm yellow light
that pours over everyone
I love,"
I heard her mumble, walking back home. A weird concept of just being the sunlight in your family. Bent at the all the right angles. I'll never get used to it.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Thu Apr 07, 2016 10:37 am
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7/30

nocturnally hurdling through time
in this space my body takes up,
volume we define by what it displaces--
the places i'm in are calculated by what i give up.

life awaits with every moment,
not for you to remind us of your glory
that is how the petty exist--
not capable of handling their own insignificance.

as descending to a new tier of blackness
one so dark,
even the shadows seem white in comparison.

you cannot kill time
it sits there laughing at your tries,
watches as you confront it with lies
idly patient waiting for your demise.

enjoy it while you can
because time is forever, whereas we simply are not.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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8/30

i'd often dreamed of you through the
storms at night, where the thunder
screams into the night. the lightning becomes the
flashlight, brightening up my life-- you only made it worthwhile for
a few seconds, you said. the rain continued to fall,
drops of melancholy from the sky.

even after the storm,
i can still see the moon and wonder about tomorrow
because the sun, too, will rise.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sat Apr 09, 2016 3:26 pm
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9/30

moments are forever forgetful and the
hours that filled the lemonade cup from a younger age
are in my hand; it holds perspiration, slipping from my fingers.
you are the seconds being counted down
until something big happens and the
moment it does, people regret or remember.
the moments that are imagined, the hours that are
sitting in the bottom of the bottle he drinks every night,
seconds are the moments that she wished to remember, holding onto the
baby with dear life.

these moments we think of, have two roads:
hours that are sleepless nights and thunderstorms
and
seconds that are crying girls and starry nights.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sun Apr 10, 2016 5:30 am
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10/30

there is a girl
who is complex like a puzzle,
walking the streets. her thoughts douse her
in gasoline, waiting for a flame.

there is a boy
who holds the secrets of the world in the palm of his hand,
watching the skies cry. his memories are echoing
like the voices inside a conch shell.

the both share the same story
lives intertwining with something grander than themselves--
a spot in the middle of an ocean.

bubblegum being tasted
sweet summer air in between their teeth,
dreams they share as one. nightmares disguise as one.

the girl wanders alone
thinking too much of her future
(don't run away from the future; be afraid of what it may hold).

the boy stares off into the void, his eyes red from the stress
moved quickly through time
(the past you wish to forget will soon overpower you, becoming something greater)

the beast is hungry and
looking for prey: the summer air
thick with humidity. he can't see her anymore;
she can't feel him anymore. dark shades of
red in her eyes, smiling 'murder'.

he panics, locking the door and
forgetting the girl. the missing puzzle piece that holds his hand,
gives him warm, yellow butterflies on balloons. the storm is only brewing,
harsh screams and cries:

tap, tap, tap

there is a girl
who holds a secret in the palm of her hand,
her reality clashing with the nightmares she once forgotten.

there is a boy
broken like a hand-me-down wristwatch,
his thoughts jumbled yet standing still. his heart dead.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2016 10:31 am
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11/30

i listened closely to the silence,
down the forgotten chambers of our love and
the fading memories of spring (quietly whispering among the daffodils)--
i took that an answer
and waited for seconds
minutes
hours
years
just for you
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:52 pm
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12/30

the morning dew hangs in the air
glistening on the evergreen tips and
dancing on the dying spring grass-- it whispers a
song to the bluebirds, who in return sigh in grace. the morning
is cold and blurry
like rain falling down a window in may--
dancing during a thunderstorm is all
i need to remind me of you
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  








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