you felt it before anything; cool wind through open window, smell of rain on wet cement floating between goosebumps
you can almost hear the swells in the storm between baseball on the radio (home, summer, freshcutgrass and overhot skin turning tanlines red through sunscreen) and the cat demanding attentionfoodplaywithme (tuna breath and wet cat) but the black sky fades into the water puddling outside the door slowly creeping closer
it's late spring and even the bugs are confused flying into rain to dance back to lamplight wavering with wet wings to the siren call of blue light (imminent death) that bathes both them and the growing night.
***Under the Responsibility of S.P.E.W.*** (Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)
Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.
I'm not sure if I made it in time or not, but if I were not, sorry about that! Internet problem! >.<
Spoiler! :
You Came and Gone, but I Would Wait
On that gloomy day, I sit beside the open door, on the hard floor, cold brought by cement, thinking of you, Happiness.
You came when I was small, when I was playing at the swing and then at the see-saw with my friends. You made me smile and laugh as if on earth there was no problem for me.
When I was a teenager, you still accompanied me with your light as brilliant as the sun, and was more mesmerizing than gold was. I knew what was monkey love: exchanging letters with him who had the same excitement as I had; at recess time met in the canteen with friends, so that no one suspected; and finally, because couldn’t bear the feeling that felt like water overflowing the well, I and him expressed our love and kept referred each other as ‘love’.
When I was an adult, you were still there but with a dimmer light and a fading colour when a monkey love was brought more than it should to the ocean. He and I were drowning in the sea of lust And you disappeared, leaving me in darkness when I felt something move in my belly. I panicked, because after a while, I knew I carried a life within me. He shouted mockery to me and spat disgust on my face and left me when, with a maternal instinct starting to bloom, I rejected his suggestion for abortion.
Now, when I am waiting for the baby to be born, I hope everyone around me start behaving like a human and give a helping hand to me so that I would not continue to burn in this acid of sin and could smile, when you appear again.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.
The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
You're good @Lightsong! There are just over two hours left and I'm going to be playing don't starve with my sister so between you and me (and everyone else) I won't be opening the judging pad for at least 3/4 hours.
So there's still time for those who haven't posted yet
There were a lot of close calls this week and the quality of the poems is really fantastic!
Unfortunately some people do have to leave the competition and it's my job to tell you who. The names in bold below are the lucky winners going through to the next round, though the last three will still face one more battle for the semi finals!
erm...a poem? Yeah, I have some of those. I think. <.<
*looks into notebook and digs up one*
Spoiler! :
I am calm. (voices, running, can't run, mud sticking you to the ground in a slimy embrace as high-pitched voices shatter your mind into shards).
I must be calm. (fragments stabbing your skill earnings pounding by bombshells dropping on bullet-stained houses to the tune of bloody nose throwing red specks on the earth and praying for light).
Patience is a virtue. (no place to run, hide, cover, trapped in Texas hailstorm falling through your frayed hat and into a frazzled soul cracking in duress and stress).
Now, where am I? (Where you never wanted to be, where tea is served cold and smells fishy and cars drill pebbles into your back and lasso you into the barrel of a rifle).
What is wrong with me? (Nothing, if you like Pollock paintings where torn skin is the canvas and the paint drains back into buckets out of fear to be replaced by flesh beaten and withered and broken).
What is wrong with me? (What is wrong with me?)
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse a persona che mai tornasse al mondo, questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse. Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero, senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.
The results are in and this one was a little contested but that just shows what great and talented poets we have! But sadly it is time to say goodbye to two of our contestants and the poet going through to the semi finals is...
The semi final kicks off today and it's an (almost) All Star show with three poetry mods facing off against one another and a Storybook mod thrown in to shake up the mix!
you felt it before anything; cool wind through open window, smell of rain on wet cement floating between goosebumps
you can almost hear the swells in the storm between baseball on the radio (home, summer, freshcutgrass and overhot skin turning tanlines red through sunscreen) and the cat demanding attentionfoodplaywithme (tuna breath and wet cat) but the black sky fades into the water puddling outside the door slowly creeping closer
it's late spring and even the bugs are confused flying into rain to dance back to lamplight wavering with wet wings to the siren call of blue light (imminent death) that bathes both them and the growing night.
***Under the Responsibility of S.P.E.W.*** (Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)
Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.
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