Kanome! ^^ Poem One is so very thoughtful and on-point, and I'm wondering what the double negatives nearing the end are supposed to mean—possible a double meaning there? Or some twist of events? Either way, it's intriguing, and I'm hoping to see more from you. :3
Holding the key to the world I believe in The one I call a place of new beginnings If I could let go of something I cared for It would be mortal life Creating new memories Creating new bonds between immortality and love I want to have eternal life Up in the bright sky I would stare down And watch over the people of my people My kind My own flesh and blood I will grow my wings Soaring across the sky Shining a light over darkness within the Devil's lair I will protect the ones under the Oath of God's name I will create a barrier surrounding the mortals of the world I will begin a new life as an angel.
I jot down the lines of my thoughts, I draw the creatures of my imagination, I write the words of my broken mind, I type letters of my visualization.
I caress the works of my papers, I think of the new ideas of the world, I hug the themes that has brought me here, I kiss my pen that has made me become who I am.
Feeling numb to the core, Holding the empty orange bottle in my hands. I see the room spinning over and over, As my mind wonders into a different world.
Visualizing my future, Going downhill as my anxiety becomes worse. I can't help but feel sadness, I can't help but feel crazy.
This candy-popping addiction, That's all I have, That's all I need, In order to survive in the dark society of ours.
Being held to the touch from the warmth of his heart, Feeling the touch of his fingers against my cold skin, Wanting more and more of his lovely touch, Dreaming of the man I want to cherish more than anything.
Don't ever let go of this moment, Never give up on the love in your heart, Cherishing the lives the two share, Even though no one doesn't really care.
This painful feeling won't go away, No matter where I go, No matter who I am with, It's still there, stabbing my shattering heart.
How much can I endure? This sadness deep inside me, I want it to go away, but it can't It refuses.
Does pain last? Making it cry silently in my small bed, Wanting to self-inflict but can't, This is the person I became...
I used to be happy, positive, filled with joy. Once I got older, the more miserable I became. Love hurts, not matter what you go. Pain lasts, no matter how much you run away.
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