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Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:56 am
Kanome says...



I accept this challenge. Let's see if I am prepared for it though..
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Wed Apr 01, 2015 5:27 am
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Poem One: I Am Nothing


Curled up in darkness,
Feeling nothing but despair,
Happiness gone,
Tears flow nonstop.

Heart torn,
To where there’s nothing,
Mind blank,
To the point of no return.

Why couldn’t it be me?
The one you supposedly yearned for.
Why is it her?
The one you claim to hate.

The pain you bring,
Only makes me crumble,
To where I am nothing,
I am nothing no more.
Last edited by Kanome on Mon Apr 06, 2015 5:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Apr 03, 2015 5:18 am
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Kanome! ^^ Poem One is so very thoughtful and on-point, and I'm wondering what the double negatives nearing the end are supposed to mean—possible a double meaning there? Or some twist of events? Either way, it's intriguing, and I'm hoping to see more from you. :3

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Mon Apr 06, 2015 4:53 am
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Poem Two: Falling Victim


Seeing the light fade,
body stay still.
Seeing the dark ascend,
mind goes blank.

I don't have much time,
there are things I need to say,
things I must do,
things I must protect.

God, protect my offsprings,
from abuse,
from neglect,
from negative obstacles.

I have falling victim,
please,
don't let them fall victim too.

God, listen to my prayer.
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Tue Apr 07, 2015 5:00 am
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Poem Three: The Angel Belief


Holding the key to the world I believe in
The one I call a place of new beginnings
If I could let go of something I cared for
It would be mortal life
Creating new memories
Creating new bonds between immortality and love
I want to have eternal life
Up in the bright sky
I would stare down
And watch over the people of my people
My kind
My own flesh and blood
I will grow my wings
Soaring across the sky
Shining a light over darkness within the Devil's lair
I will protect the ones under the Oath of God's name
I will create a barrier surrounding the mortals of the world
I will begin a new life as an angel.
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Tue Apr 07, 2015 5:15 am
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Poem Four: Tangled in Web


My fingertips are tied
Concealed into my misshapen heart.
Two on each side
Wanting me to choose.

Tangled inside my own web,
Hard to tear.
One wants me,
One needs me.

Can't decide based on these feelings
Can't hurt or lose.
Both want me,
Both need me.

Help me, please.
Who should I choose?
One or the other?
I am tangled inside my own web.

Confused.
Detained.
Web-bound.
Where I have no choice but to choose.
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 5:42 am
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Poem Five: To my enemy..


Once loved by you,
Once comforted by you,
Held and cherished,
Words that made me fall for you.

Our future was built,
Our lives planned,
Our love complete,
You were my first love.

Next thing I knew,
You were gone,
You were with another,
You were pretending.

How can you do this?
Hurt me?
Belittle me?
Use me to the point where I am nothing?

Once, my love,
Now, my enemy.
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 5:54 am
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Poem Six: Darkness Controls


Holding my chest ever so tightly,
crying out for help,
begging for someone to come to me,
taking me away from this horrible place.

I sit here, my arms hugging my knees,
my head hiding in between them,
protecting myself from the enemy,
tears flowing on my cheeks.

The darkness surrounds me,
wanting to consume me,
consuming the pure light out of me,
craving for evil.

God, help me please,
Help me overcome the darkness that controls my heart,
the evilness that guides my mind,
Help me please.

I scream through the darkness,
wanting to leave,
wanting to quit suffering,
feeling despair and sadness.

Someone,
please help me.
Help me overcome the darkness that controls my light.
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Thu Apr 09, 2015 7:50 am
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Poem Seven: My Hand is Here


Seeing you curled into your own darkness,

Wanting to be loved and comforted,

Needing someone to be there for your time in need,

Take it, my hand is here.

Crying your heart out to the Heaven's above,

Praying for the one you want to be there,

Begging for another chance,

Take it, my hand is here.

It will be alright, my friend,

You are never alone in this dark world of ours,

Come to me and cry with me,

Take it, my hand is here.

Let me ease your pain away,

Let me take the suffering in your heart,

Let me see your hand,

Take it, my hand is here.

I will always be here, my friend.

Because my hand is here.
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Thu Apr 09, 2015 9:35 pm
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Poem Eight: Kiss My Pen


I jot down the lines of my thoughts,
I draw the creatures of my imagination,
I write the words of my broken mind,
I type letters of my visualization.

I caress the works of my papers,
I think of the new ideas of the world,
I hug the themes that has brought me here,
I kiss my pen that has made me become who I am.
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Thu Apr 09, 2015 9:38 pm
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Poem Nine: Shadows


We lurk through the darkness,
Consuming the light that surrounds us.

We fear the light also,
Wanting to be only dark and despair.

We are Shadows on the Depths,
Bringers of Hell.

Come to us, little ones,
Let us show you what true power can bring.
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Sat Apr 11, 2015 5:36 am
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Poem Ten: Candy-Popping


Feeling numb to the core,
Holding the empty orange bottle in my hands.
I see the room spinning over and over,
As my mind wonders into a different world.

Visualizing my future,
Going downhill as my anxiety becomes worse.
I can't help but feel sadness,
I can't help but feel crazy.

This candy-popping addiction,
That's all I have,
That's all I need,
In order to survive in the dark society of ours.
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Sun Apr 12, 2015 8:14 pm
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Poem Eleven: Long-Lasting Kiss


Soft and tender to the touch,
Feeling warm inside, wanting to feel more
This feeling, what is it?

Cheeks flush red from the softness,
Body becomes numb from the touch of your lips,
I want this to last, ever-lasting.
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Mon Apr 13, 2015 3:18 am
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Poem Twelve: Don't Ever Let Go


Being held to the touch from the warmth of his heart,
Feeling the touch of his fingers against my cold skin,
Wanting more and more of his lovely touch,
Dreaming of the man I want to cherish more than anything.

Don't ever let go of this moment,
Never give up on the love in your heart,
Cherishing the lives the two share,
Even though no one doesn't really care.
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Wed Apr 15, 2015 4:05 am
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Poem Thirteen: Pain Lasts


This painful feeling won't go away,
No matter where I go,
No matter who I am with,
It's still there, stabbing my shattering heart.

How much can I endure?
This sadness deep inside me,
I want it to go away, but it can't
It refuses.

Does pain last?
Making it cry silently in my small bed,
Wanting to self-inflict but can't,
This is the person I became...

I used to be happy, positive, filled with joy.
Once I got older, the more miserable I became.
Love hurts, not matter what you go.
Pain lasts, no matter how much you run away.
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Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
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