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April Madness 2015



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Sat Apr 25, 2015 1:47 am
Aley says...



Any time during april it is.

Spoiler! :
Library

Your style doesn't intrigue me,
we stand like books;
Brace cover to back cover to back
and threaten to topple over like them too
I will keep my pages tucked from your back
with my cover, and you will keep yours safe with your back
possessive like a hound with a bone, refusing to let go
gnawing, cracking, licking, suckling, you have your style
I have mine.

Sometimes I look for my lost pages
the ones who fell out because the glue of my spine
was weak enough to crackle and flake like dried milk.
I wonder if they're in you, stretching your mouth full
like an apple chunk caught in your teeth refusing to enter
a cat faced with a bathtub clinging to the rims it can find

Maybe my pages are making you look foolish
or old and used like a penny book.
If I found them in your leaves,
I don't think I would like them,
I'd reject them, think they were nothing new
say "I'd written that before" and be as unimpressed
as if your style was lacking in every way imaginable.

Side by side we stand,
porous and damp with library mildew
picked up to be smelled, not read.
Each of us offer our spines to them
not admitting whose pages are whose..
  





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Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:22 am
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QUARTER FINALS


The fights are heating up as we near the end of this year's tournament and the pressure was just too much for Audy who conceded the victory to Meshugenah. But there is no shame in backing down against such a foe as her.

Over on the other side of the ring, it looked like Aley might miss the fight as well but then in she stormed with shield raised against Pocket's attacks. The flurry of words swirled around them to the rhythm of strike, parry, strike parry but in the end, only one could survive and Pocket stood victorious.

@Meshugenah vs @Audy
@Pocket vs @Aley


FINAL ROUND


The finalists @Meshugenah and @Pocket must post their final poem (written any time in April) between the 27th and 30th April 10:00pm GMT.

Good luck to both of you!!

(The visual will be posted some time in the next day or two as unfortunately I am out tonight.)
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 3:56 pm
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Dispersion

One day, when the fog had nested
down in the brush and under the bellies
of the wet, spotted leaves,
we planted ourselves
in its absence. We waited then,
under the fat sun, for roots and leaves
and swarthy branches
to untangle and detach themselves from our skin,
for them to push from the crowns of our heads like antlers.
We grew – slowly, our skin
first breaking like porcelain and then more like paper,
turning to mulch around our wormlike roots,
which rose and leapt and burrowed under the ground again,
like fish leaping from water.

She spoke out of her tired, dilated spine
about how her lumberous body
seemed to ask for wildfire,
for ash. She heaved a great sigh,
scattering water onto the ground from her boughs.
She turned to me, creaking like
the underbelly of a ship, to say,
“It is heavier than I thought it would be.”
Her trunk sloped downwards into the sleeping fog,
threatening to collapse altogether.

She talked about light
and hunger, how her hands
could not seek anymore, only grew and splintered
and were thin, always twisting into the dark –
the luminescence she could see,
spreading upwards and far off, from our old house.
And then, she was silent, watching the light
as if she were a quiet predator, as if praying for it.

“I bet they’ve built a fire in the fireplace.
The smoke is so delicate.
I wonder how far it goes up there,
before it starts disappearing, too.”
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 4:06 pm
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studies in sound

i.
it’s a sharp staccato that dances softly
spinning words into colors that don’t quite aline
in ¾ time to spin away on upbeats, unfinished.

ii.
a melodic line only hears itself

iii.
brass wasn’t made for small fingers and delicate sounds
muted to a duller roar than drum beats
striking lightning

iv.
counter melody rests in the crevices
left between baseline and treble line
dancing just off beat to chase percussion
and whistling bells for second place
in a race predetermined by score.

v.
you cannot strike a
major chord in dissonance
but in assonance
***Under the Responsibility of S.P.E.W.***
(Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)

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Thu Apr 30, 2015 6:12 pm
Rydia says...



Man you two are good, I didn't even have to give you a reminder!

The final round of judging is now taking place and the result will be posted by the 3rd May. May the best poet win!
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Apologies for the delay! We're just waiting on one more judge's opinion and then the results will be out. Please bear with us!

Here's the visual while you're waiting!
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Sun May 10, 2015 10:04 am
Rydia says...



Apologies for the big delay but I can now announce that the winner between @Meshugenah and @Pocket in the final head to head was...



Congratulations and well done to everyone who took part - it's been a pleasure reading all of the entries and we had some great poems this year!
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Sun May 10, 2015 4:41 pm
Aley says...



Congratulations
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@Pocket!
  





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Sun Aug 16, 2015 3:41 am
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Congrats for the winner and runner-up! :)
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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