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Thu Apr 17, 2014 3:39 pm
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I love how you dedicate all of your poems to someone. That's really sweet!
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April 17.5.5.5: Peacock Feather
Dedicated to @LosCadaver

A peacock feather
glimmers
when the light hits it just right.
But when you hold it up to the light
It is etched in black and white.

The barbules strike static
Disrupting the light's path to my eyes.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 18: Hexagon Heartbeats
Dedicated to my lovely chat-husband @carbonCore (specifically for the event on the 18th NaPoWriMo Mini Events Catalogue )

Your hexagon heartbeats laid a trail of sound for me to follow.
Hexagon, the shape of perfect pencils,
and light when it's blurred.
The shape of the substance of human life.

Hexagon heartbeats flow through your words,
just picture on a screen of hexagon light.

Hexagon heartbeats, the white noise behind a silence
that is somehow filled with music.

Hexagon heartbeats, the tempo behind a music
that dances through my head
like snow drifting inches above cement.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:39 am
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April 19th: Fairy Home
Dedicated to @Meshugenah

She'll stuff those shells between her floorboards,
And watch that living wood grow around them
Encasing the calcium in slivers of a soul

She'll pave the soft earth with glass marbles,
rounded sea glass of all colors,
so smooth and shimmering the sun.

She'll string chains of flowers from every window
and let the breeze carry their scents
to some distant planet.

She'll weave a rug of twigs and leaves,
soft on her feet yet durable.
Her home will be the envy of fairies.

But if the bark is too rough
and the shells too sharp,
if splinters embed in her feet,
if the glass shatters and cuts,
if all the flowers die,
It will still be a place of her own.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 20: Deviled Eggs
Dedicated to @Adnamarine

White orbs submerged in a boiling pot
Soon to be a delicious delicacy.
Combine the golden center
Mash it up with spices
and then put it back clumsily.
Ruining perfection with delicious delights,
it's no wonder they're deviled.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 20.5: Cypher
Dedicated to @AriaAdams


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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:01 am
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I was 100% serious about publishing a book of poetry in morse code.
"Half the time the poem writes me." ~Meshugenah
  





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Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:04 am
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But who would read it Adna?
No one. That's who.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 21: Lists
Dedicated to @Alpha

The Alpha list of the upper ranks
They speak of a tradgedy long concealed
Between cyphers and numbers and body counts
are coffee rings and doodles and tear marks,
but tears only come once in a while.
This tradgedy is hard to find at first.
An unexpirienced heart may not see it as a tragedy at all.
The hands that wrote the ledgers,
The eyes that read the names,
The ears hat heard the reports from the static-filled radio,
They are human hands.
They are connected to a human heart.
And that is the tragedy.
A human heart must be strong enough
To write such sacred name
With such power.
And then seal the envelopes,
And send them on their way.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:51 pm
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Let's get back on this.
April 22: Self
Dedicated to @fortis >_>

Life is a reflection of itself.
I live in a shadow of times gone by.
The reflecting pond’s ripples distort my face,
already ravished by the sand of time.

I had been young, and mostly naïve,
but a deep weight pressed within me.
I pretended not to notice, and showed my teeth
in what could conceivably be considered a smile.
My days were filled with fleeting shadows
of someday in the future.

I had been bright, and mostly quiet.
A silence pressed on my ears
and within my throat, but I could sing.
It may have been a quiet song,
but I smiled a silent smile
and paid no attention to the darkening corners.

I had been joyful, and mostly carefree.
Filled with only the problems of a child.
I would speak freely and rapidly,
and my laughher rang like the bells.
My smile was perpetual and true,
at times, a tooth grin, although missing front teeth.
The world would forever be filled with light.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 23: Good enough.
Dedicated to: @ someone. This is hard people okay?

"Am I good enough?'
Pinch. Measure. Compare. "I'm not.
I'll skip lunch again."
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 24: The Plague in the Mirror
Dedicated to Deb

There's a plague in the mirror
It's making us measure and compare.
We need to defend
against the monsters we see there.

They're caricatures of ourselves.
They're nothing like us at all.
They don't have our smarts or humor,
but they're just as wide, just as tall.

Except the plague addles our minds,
we see it in such distortion,
we see a fat monster, thinking it is us,
but it's just blown out of proportion.

How can we stop this plague in the mirror?
and get rid of the monsters that stare all day?
We need to ignore the glass,
We've got to get away.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 25: Tears
Dedicated to: @Auxiira (I don't know why, so shh)

When I cried--
the few times that I did--
I saved the tears in a jar.
They turned yellow,
but I told you
that every drop was needed.

When you cried--
which was all too often--
you let them dry off your face,
like slowly-melting diamonds.
You said if enough tears evaporated,
they might make a cloud,
something neither you nor I
had ever seen.

There was salt on your face,
when you looked so frail
that you were about to break.
You smiled up at me,
your lips splitting,
and your final drop of water
streamed from your eye.

I was filled with a cloud
that produced no rain,
just lightning and thunder.
And I thundered and lightninged,
I swore upon all the salt in my body,
until the it settled at the bottom,
and the floods rose out of me,
falling like twin rivers out of my eyes.
But I never caught the tears.
Who would I be saving them for?

I poured the old yellowing jar
onto your sandy grave,
but even that did not moisten your lips.

But you were right.
If I had let my tears out, maybe it would have come sooner.

A dark cloud rolled onto the sky above us.
I thought death had come to take me too.
I did not know the meaning of this beastly angel.
Until it cried.
And wetted your face
that had so often been as wet
as the rain that had never come
till now.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 26: Unnameable light
Dedicated to @ShadowVyper

The light is shining so beautifully,
but I don’t know how to describe it.
I feel like this light should be remembered,
like it should be put to poetry and song.
But I have no words to describe this light.
Just my eyes to take it in.
I must accept that I do not have a connection
straight from my eyes to my fingers.
That not everything I see can be put into words.
I must accept that even though
this light may seem extraordinary to me,
it may seem extremely ordinary to others.
Who wants to read about some boring light
that they will never see?
No one, that’s who.
No one cares about the little pieces of beauty,
unless they can see it for themselves.
That’s where pictures come in handy.
But I know I can’t take a good picture of this light.
It just won’t turn out.
So I’ll have to sit here, and content myself
in this moment. Knowing that this little shard of beauty
is mine and only mine.
Accept that I can’t share
how perfect this moment is with anyone.
Maybe that’s how it’s meant to be.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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April 27: Too Far Gone
Dedicated to Patrick M.

The raspberry skies have wilted,
Only the molding splotches of stars are left now, sprouting from the
Obsidian blanket that is smothering us.

Freedom is a lie of the past. The trees
Are plasticized. Leaves are just skin of the world. The sky is a
Roof against the eternal empty voids that threaten to consume us.

Gooseberries and willows are drenched in preservation chemicals.
Oblivion creeps closer and closer. It is a
Never-ending
End.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  








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