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Rate the Signature Above You [4]



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Mon Jun 30, 2014 5:46 pm
Zolen says...



7/10

Lies homicide investigators spends hours upon hours thinking about how to best kill a person. Also drill sargents, psychopaths lack complex emotion but they aren't inherently evil, there were probably some very capable psychopaths who put up your homes roof.
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Mon Jun 30, 2014 10:44 pm
Rook says...



8/10
I'm having a hard time focusing on your signature so it doesn't make a lot of sense.
Mostly because of the word "always." That word always throws me off and makes me go back and try to think of any time when it wasn't true.
Also, this thread has been locked. It's getting too long.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

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