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Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:22 am
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Nate says...



Black
Blackness overwhelms
Light
Light does not come
Blue
Blue where are you?
Pink
I hate pink
Black
Blackness overwhelms

* curtains close *
  





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Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:23 am
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Nate says...



OMG! THIS IS LIKE THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  





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Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:23 am
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Nate says...



Well, the point system seems to be in order here.
  





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Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:26 am
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Nate says...



I'm proud of this poem. Moved from 'Other Poetry' to 'Randomness.'
  





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Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:27 am
Via says...



I suppose the points just hate me :(

Thanks for testing it!
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:30 am
bubblewrapped says...



.....indeed...
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:44 am
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I'm so confused right now.
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:35 am
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Crysi says...



Nate, stop spamming! I know you're excited about your poem, but honestly... Four posts in a row is a bit much, don't you think? ;)
Love and Light
  





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Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:42 am
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Snoink says...



Wow... she pwned you. XD
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:03 am
Incandescence says...



this is so cool!!!!!!! grate job nate, ur relly gud!!!!!!
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:05 am
Jiggity says...



Haha, Brad has been watching Charlie the unicorn, lol.
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Sun May 06, 2007 2:41 am
Nutty says...



I hate pink too...
It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.
  





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Sun May 06, 2007 7:55 pm
Matt Bellamy says...



I adore charlie the unicorn.
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Sun May 06, 2007 7:56 pm
Emerson says...



I just saw Charlie the unicorn for the first time yesterday... *finally gets everything*
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Sun May 06, 2007 8:10 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



The German dub of the "Candy Mountain" one is a scream. XD "Oh mein Gott, what is vas?" XD

Nice poem, by da way, Nate ;)
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