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Gem's Poetic Chronicles



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Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:56 pm
fatherfig says...



I will be experimenting with poetry and formatting here.
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"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri Dec 10, 2021 1:20 am
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the tides shifting
sounded like a city moving through the hole in a conch shell
tires rolling into a future that was not as uncertain as it seemed
and yes the moon ruled the tides as it ruled it all
everything moved at night
like the slender sillouhette of a man
whose fit arms were taught as he scaled a building
he struggled but completed his task meticulously
the sound of the tides hid the noise of the broken glass
flashing lights dimmed by the moons bright glow
his shadow was cast on the building by search lights
but he evaded them like any who've ever planned an exit
the shadow was tall and slender with broad shoulders
and they did carry much responsibility
but the lady who had fallen in the apartment
laid unconcious barely touched as he departed
the search lights never stopped however
the man was wanted for murder forever
he was not the only one who had invaded her home that night
he was just the first to leave
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri Dec 10, 2021 2:46 pm
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the other who was waiting stood there
like a doorstop to the closet he didn't own
before that he had stood in the parking lot
waiting on a girl he used to know
he had roses in his hands gripped tight
those cruel hands bled from the fury of their thorns
the ladies refusal had fallen upon deaf ears
pushed by the thought of an eternity
he couldn't bring himself to an eternity alone
only in her presence he frantically thought
so he followed her home
soft steps hidden by the tides noise
subtle movements looked over
probably just the flashing lights
heavy breath no its just the wind blowing
he watched as she reassured herself
he waited twenty minutes standing in the rain
for her to fall asleep
he let himself in with her backup key
that was when the robbery took place
but he never took anything
besides the ladies life and grace
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2022 6:59 pm
fatherfig says...



i am all that is left of the girl
i've forgotten what life tastes like

i am tired of being tired of it all
and laying on the ground
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  








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