Well, I don't know if this applies to me, but i wrote a poem in like ten minutes in a hurry so here it is. I'm also terrible at poetry so take it with a grain of salt...or maybe some alcohol, lol.
Here it is:
She said she loved him
On the first night they met
It's as true then as it is now
On that you can bet
She said she loved him
When they went on their first date
He wanted to say it back
But he waited too late
She said she loved him
When he began kneeling
He told her, "You may find this bananas,
but I find you quite apeeling."
She said she loved him
After the birth of their daughter
They were rockets only going higher, he thought
Then went to fetch her some water
She said she loved him
and reminded him to get his tie
He hiked happily up the stairs to find it
Never knowing that it was a lie
So, in case you missed it, here's the devices.
Repition: first line of every paragraph
Alliteration: "He hiked happily..."
Pun: "You may find this bananas, but I find you quite apeeling."
Metaphor: "They were rockets only going higher..."
And that's it!
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