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SSB: Chaos Destiny (PREVIEW)



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Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:13 pm
tcgamergirl997 says...



Well because I can't fit the description in the, well... description I'll put it here.

When the Smash Bros were called by Master Hand to help save Earth and their own worlds from yet, another disaster. They discover that an ordinary 14 year-old girl named Tia, who had the ability to turn the tides of war and stop the madness escaping. However, Tia has a hard time trying to understand who she is and keeping the Smash Bros a secret from everyone she knows. Including the government. This is all written in first person views.

Yer I'm just making a preview of my story first before I actually write cause I like to write a bit before I post it so yer...
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Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:47 pm
sugarweregoingdown says...



A story about Super Smash Brothers? WIN.
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Mon Oct 24, 2011 7:05 am
tcgamergirl997 says...



it'll be awhile before i post it up :/

but thnx for reading the preview :)
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Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:28 pm
wardemon42 says...



YOU HAD ME AT MARIO SMASH BROS. I have every game(except new one) of them
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Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:19 pm
roostangarar says...



I noticed several grammatical errors and some unnecessary full-stops. I hope you proof read the story before you post it, or it'll actually be worse than a lack of Smash Bros. stories. Sorry to be the bad guy, but someone needs to be realistic. Good luck though!
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Fri Nov 04, 2011 11:34 pm
LoneWolf161 says...



I love you I love super smash bros my fave game as you now TC as we have played it together
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Sun Nov 06, 2011 12:47 am
tcgamergirl997 says...



Thnx lonewolf yer hopefully i can get 1st chapter up soon
  





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Thu Nov 10, 2011 3:58 am
LoneWolf161 says...



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Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:44 pm
Shadowwriter1 says...



I can't help but be slightly confused by this. It sounds like a prologue or a brief summary of a soon to be story except for the other random lines. There are a few grammer errors but the story sounds interesting. I hope you will continue on withe the story and good luck and keep writing, for after all, writers are made, not born.
  





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Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:12 am
tcgamergirl997 says...



Meh, I probably won't upload the story til later on. But I'll continue on with A Legend's Path first before I write this one. But hey, thanks for the two reviews! :)
  








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