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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:00 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



"Why?" she said out loud.
She had no idea how to insert messages into other people's minds.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:02 pm
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"Because there are no luck dragons anymore." Starlon replied, walking across a bridge and into the castle.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:03 pm
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"Oh. I'm sorry." She said, releasing the puppy a little.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:09 pm
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"Thank you" starlon replied, "come, people are anxious to meet you."

Cleo shot a concerned look at Hope. She didn't want to be mobbed by people when she was on her way to meet the ruler, and especially since she had no idea as to why they were there!
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:12 pm
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"Yay!!!! Can't wait!" She said and followed.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:14 pm
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Cleo picked up her goat and followed. Cleo was very shy when it came to people, so crowds concerned her and made her nervous.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:17 pm
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Hope took her hand, feeling her nervousness.
"It's going to be fine. They'll love you!"
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:18 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Cleo didn't reply, but kept ahold of hope's hand, grateful for the comfort. Her goat nuzzled her.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:21 pm
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"Awww cute!" She cried.
Her puppy was hugging Cleo's goat.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:24 pm
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"Awwwww" Cleo cried. Starlon had stopped, and waited until they were next to him. They were in front of a huge door. "Get ready." He rumbled, and pushed the door open.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:28 pm
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"I came here unprepared!" Hope shouted.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:30 pm
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"What do you mean!?" Cleo asked.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:33 pm
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"I just arrived here, didn't I? For me to be prepared, I need chocolate!"
She said, smiling a broad smile.
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:39 pm
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Cleo rolled her eyes, but she was smiling. Cleo's goat bleated, and suddenly, each one of them had a bar of chocolate. Cleo stared at her goat in amazement.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

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Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:42 pm
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"CHOCOLATE!" She screamed as the chocolate landed on her puppy's head.
The dog barked. ((Aww so cute!!!!))
"I know what I'm going to name you!" Hope said to her puppy.
"Chocolate!" She said, and chocolate barked again and panted happily.
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