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Thor the Younger



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Tue Nov 13, 2018 3:05 pm
Bellarke says...



"Look, If Loki does not know you, he does not know you." Elia rolls her eyes, and turns to the girl.......
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 3:09 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



"I am not arguing that point. If he thinks I am lying, that is his problem. I am saying that if he wants confirmation, he can search my mind." Shiane said, her face as calm as ever.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 3:15 pm
fatherfig says...



Loki scans her mind, "It is true, why have you searched?"

Little Thor laughs as he is pulled away.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 3:20 pm
Bellarke says...



"Thor, Have you ever wanted to be the older brother? So you can be king one day, and choose your queen, or rule over Asgard?" Alia flops on the chair, watching Thor.
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

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Tue Nov 13, 2018 3:26 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



"To thank you. I owe you a debt. I am here to pay it, and to actually meet you in person."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 5:54 pm
fatherfig says...



Thor looks up, "He he he, your silly! Kings have to do to much work. I WANT TO BE A GREAT WARRIOR!!!"

Loki cringes at the change in volume.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 5:56 pm
Bellarke says...



"Oh." Alai grabs an apple, and takes a huge bite into it.


Elia walks past Loki, patting him on the back. "Good luck with your brother. I dont think he will ever grow out of his warrior faze."
“Who we are and who we need to be to survive are very different things.”

~Bellamy Blake





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 5:57 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Shiane went back into her corner, watching and observing. Her short armored skirt clinked softly as she sat.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:08 pm
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"I don't think so either, but I think that he would be better suited for the throne." He smiles, "With that warrior spirit of his, I would gladly settle into a quiet life. The choice is not mine to make." Loki smiles again watching the children play and eat.

(('BROTHER, I NEVER WANTED THE THRONE, I ONLY EVER WANTED TO BE SEEN AS YOUR EQUAL!'))
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:10 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Shiane's eyes cloud over as watching the children reminds her of an experience she had with her sister.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:29 pm
fatherfig says...



Loki sensing sorrow stops smiling.

((he is still Freya's favorite bc he still has more inflection and feeling...))
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:32 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



((XD))
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:34 pm
fatherfig says...



He looks to Shiane suddenly understanding, "I am sorry." He looks down at his feet. "Children have a moment of silence.."

Young Thor nods and looks to Alia, "Shhhhhh, we are honoring Warriors now bow your head like this and think about bravery and wish them to Valhalla.."

Loki smiles with sympathy and a certain pride in his younger brother.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:38 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Shiane smiled.

"Thank you. I did not realize you could sense my sadness."

((My characters lead tragic, epic lives anymore.They didn't used to.))
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Nov 13, 2018 6:43 pm
fatherfig says...



Little Thor whispers, "Is it over? because I wished them to Valhalla already..."

Loki smiles sadly and whispers to Thor, "I have too but lets stay silent and let every one else..."

Thor nods whispering faintly, "Okay.."
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig








"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind