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The Rift (Reboot)



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Sun Jul 15, 2018 3:09 pm
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"I was also running," he says. "Attempting to drag my sorry hide to safety before I got shot again. You?"
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Sun Jul 15, 2018 3:17 pm
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“My story’s about the same. Except instead of guns I was more worried about getting sliced to pieces by giant axes.”
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.






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Sun Jul 15, 2018 3:26 pm
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"Verdammt, what did you do to piss people off that much, Herr Luke?"
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 5:15 am
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James just looked over to Kratzer with the hint of a smirk on his face. "That's a little personal, don't you think? I'm not asking what you did to get shot in the heart."
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 6:06 am
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He chuckles. "Fair, but if you were to ask I'd gladly tell you."
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 10:21 am
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He looked wildly between the two of them, trying to understand what they had just said. He had been running away, too, but not from anything like that! It was kind of scary when he thought about it. What where these two guys doing that could get them hurt like that? A chill ran up his spine. They seemed okay earlier, but now both of them were kind of scary. He slunk into the back corner and watched the three men with somewhat wide eyes.

He really wanted to run away again, but he was sure these guys would be able to catch him better than the guards could.
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Any semblance of a smirk on his face had completely vanished as he saw the boy slink away into the corner, and despite himself, he felt a tug at his heart. Aen was scared. He looked over to Aen, but still spoke as if talking to Kratzer.

"...That said, though we all are complete strangers, I'd like to assure you that at least, in the eyes of anyone with a decent moral compass, I was on the 'good guy' side of the fight. Though I know that's always subjective." It was then that he paused and looked over to Aen.

"There's..." he attempted the warmest look he could muster, without actually smiling. "I'm not a violent man. I don't go looking for trouble. And I won't harm anyone here, Aen. Least of all you."
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 2:44 pm
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"What's happening?" asked Hali, concerned, glancing warily at Luke and Kratzer as Aen backed away. "Aen . . . ?"
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Mon Jul 16, 2018 4:54 pm
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Kratzer chooses silence over deception or the truth; the fact is, he's anything but an ethical, moral, or honorable man, but he'd rather not scare the kid any further, so he doesn't speak a word more.
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Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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He looked from the two men to Hali, scooting just a little closer to the later. After glancing at them, he raised a hand to cover his mouth and stood on the very tips of his toes. He was far from tall enough to fully reach where Hali's ears were, but it was close enough. "They were running from really dangerous people," he informed him. "With all sorts of dangerous weapons. That makes them scary too."

He thought for a moment. "Although Luke says he's a good person..."

He stopped standing on his toes and turned back to Luke. Crossing his arms and looking him over with a wary glint to his eyes, he asked, "You're really telling the truth?"
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Tue Jul 17, 2018 11:29 am
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"Yes," James replied honestly - even if he had only told the truth in part, what he said was genuine.
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Tue Jul 17, 2018 11:38 am
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He turned to Hali. "He says he's telling the truth." Then he turned back to James, thought a moment and said with an approving nod of the head. "Well, I'm a good guy too."
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James smiled, for just a moment, and then it was gone. "Glad to hear it."
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Tue Jul 17, 2018 2:59 pm
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Hali nodded and sighed. He supposed he had been running from dangerous people as well.
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Kratzer continues not to engage in the conversation, instead looking around to see if he can find a shirt that's not covered in blood to change into.
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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