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Sat Aug 08, 2015 8:25 pm
RedEyedRunt says...



Melissa Maggs:

"You know doc, here, our bite is worse than our bark . . ."

"If you want to get into our minds, you'll have to try harder. I'm not the kind of woman who likes to share my feelings, and to open new doors of "Wellness"."
Winterfell is cold.





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Sun Aug 09, 2015 11:08 am
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BellaRoma says...



A quick exchange between two of my characters.

Layla: Doc's so... detached.
Mercy: And to think that he's in the midst of a bunch of sociopaths.
You cannot train yourself to notice,
To feel pain, and swallow fear





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Sun Sep 13, 2015 3:14 pm
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Seigmeyer says...



( first time contributing so please don't crucify me)
exchange between my two characters, that are mortal enemies, and Absolom Just Blinked(teleported) in front of Saskajarru. (this is well into the conversation).
Absolom: you will never be able to handle this.I AM A GOD
Saskajarru: I'm stronger!
Absolom: I'm the better specimen
Saskajarru: Yeah well... I'm faster!
Absolom: I'm better looking.
Saskajarru: I've got a girlfriend!
Absolom: I CREATED EVERYTHING!!!
Saskajarru:........I'm...I'm...I'm...more....y'know....UGH SCREW YOU ABSOLOM! YOU SUCK!
Absolom: aaaaaaaand you just proved that I'm better than you.





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Tue Feb 23, 2016 8:46 pm
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gennagrace says...



"He was a maze, and she was a mystery. Two things that apart are interesting and fun, but together they form something powerful and dangerous."

That one is from one of my unpublished stories.

"And too much hurt can cause people to be damaged. And too much damage causes people to break. And when you break, you're done. You don't ever really get fixed. Sure, people can come along and help you and make you feel better, but you never heal. You just stay broke. It makes some people strong, others weak and scared, others harsh and cold. Hurt changes people. It always does."

"It's ironic how fall is so beautiful yet everything is dying."

The last two are from Break Away Baby.





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FallWolf says...



Pandora (unpublished and unwritten line from my soon-to-be written novella Reality)

"Pandora, the girl who opened a box. Now I am stuck with her name, and what seems to be her legacy; that of opening things."

And, of course, Wink from various RPGs:

"WHAT DID YOU DO?!?"





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ChieTheWriter says...



A line my fanfic character (Chie) says that REALLY bugs another character. Here's their conversation.

Han: Oh great. Now we're stuck in a cell and scheduled to be blown to bits whenever the Empire pleases.
Chie: Well, at least we're in it together brother.
Han: Will you EVER stop calling me that?!?
"Nobody has an easy time in this world. Either you climb out of the muck and become a human being, or you die." - Josh Randall, Wanted: Dead or Alive





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Fri Jul 15, 2016 4:13 pm
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JuliasSneezer says...



This is my first contribution, so someone please correct me if I'm not doing this right. XD

This is an exchange between my four main characters.

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"Besides, Oliver, it should help you with your square syndrome." Luke smirked.

Oliver knitted his eyebrows together. "Square syndrome?"

"Oliver's not a square," Julia protested. "He's just smart, and enjoys following the rules."

Lee crossed her arms. "Yeah. In other words, a square."

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Thanks for reading!
"When in doubt, improvise!"
-Winny the woodpecker





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Wed Jul 27, 2016 3:48 pm
RedEyedRunt says...



Young Jillian Kiland and Babysitter

*Young Jillian coughs in bed, Babysitter is pouring sugar into a jug, Jillian's eyes go wide,

"Just a jugful of Sugar makes the medicine go down-"

"IN THE MOST DELIGHTFUL WAYYYYY!"

*Jillian grabs jug and chugs it, Parents walk in,

"Honey, are you feeling-"

O-O
Winterfell is cold.





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Wed Aug 31, 2016 9:48 am
SacredPen says...



Here's an exchange between two of my characters.

Kiralyn, a dragon-human-hybrid has just breached two reinforced doors on the 5th floor of the high school Rentra to get to Puritan - a human - in hopes to see why she can't find him in any mandatory hunting classes.

"So. This is where you've been hiding from me."

"My apologies, madam?"

"Hey! Don't you "madam" me! Formalities won't save you, you know!"

"From what, may I ask?"

"Um, hel-LO?! Do you have ANY idea what you're looking at right now?!"

"I...uh,,,Do you want me to describe you?"

"What? No- you know what, fine. Go ahead."

"You're a roughly 5 foot 4 girl with yellow hair, a school uniform, red eyes, and...uh...
you're roughly 14 years old."

"Huh? How could you tell my age?"

"If you look kneel down to be at face level enough, you'll know."

"Okay, regardless, do you know who I am?"

"No, actually. I don't. It is my first day of work and all."

"I'm the legendary Dragoness of Rentra! The Master Huntswoman who never lets a prey escape! I'll have you know, Mr. Security Guard, that if you cross my path once, I won't hesitate to add you to my collection!"

"That's rather nice to know, Kiralyn."

"What?! How'd you-?!"

"Your nametag. On your student ID card. Right on your belt loop."

"Ugh! What-EVER!"
"Why do I need money to live? Can't I just, like, photosynthesize or something?"








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