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Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene

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Sun Dec 18, 2011 6:21 pm
AliyahPillage says...

I love the picture, I love twilight, but to me the mouth is a little awkward, not that I could do any better but just thought I'd give a little bit of criticism.
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Mon Dec 19, 2011 6:44 pm
Cspr says...

Very nice job! Can't think of much else to say . . . the others pretty much covered it . . . but I had to comment. It is quite gorgeous. :)

I'd love to see an inked/colored version of this. I imagine it'd be absolutely lovely.

Good job at using texture and shadow too, by the way.
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Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:59 pm
MysticalBlood says...

Wow! This is amazing! She's probably my favourite female character out of all the twilight films. Bella's too moany. Anyway, on to the review! So, i absolutely love the eyes and the eyebrows, they look very realistic. But i feel as though the nose looks way too weird, it looks flat and 2D as opposed to the rest. There isn't enough shading on it and the tip looks so strange. I love the lips and the hair, the shading is brilliant there. The cheekbones look great too.
I feel as though you've been a little rough with the pencil strokes in the hair and the clothes though, maybe soften them up.
Other than that, it's a great picture and looks exactly like her!
Well done!
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