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Thu Nov 24, 2005 3:28 am
Sponson Light says...



Yeah, read the stories about the Blood Elves who teleport and junk.
I thought Id elaborate more on how they teleport.
The arm thing is the Phoenix Talon, noone likes getting hit with that.
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Thu Nov 24, 2005 5:44 pm
Elephant says...



I really like the face, and the detail work down on the armor and the arm. But the body stance seems wrong, like his torso is twisting in the wrong way, or maybe it's because of the thickness of the armor, I'm not sure. Very nice work though.

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Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:00 am
Gwenevire says...



Its nice but its kinda abstract...
You should explain the body parts a bit.
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:14 am
Wolf says...



Overall, this is quite good.
However, the chest armor makes it look like he has...breasts. Heh...you might want to fix that. Also, I'm not crazy about the sketchy black lines on the punching arm. And the ears made me burst out laughing. :lol:

On the up side, the detail on the armor and his outfit was really awesome. I also really liked how you drew the face. :)

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Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:24 am
Via says...



I like it much, as expected! But, also as expected, I'd love some color!

The right (if you are looking at it) leg kind of gets lost in the hustle, he could be legless!

So, elves aren't short then?
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Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:58 am
Squall says...



The elf ears seem a bit too long and it appears as though the legs aren't connected that well with the pelvis area.
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Sat Dec 08, 2007 9:36 am
chocoholic says...



Umm... I didn't get it. It looks as if he's stepping out of a fire very awkrawdly, and is he holding something in his hand? It just looks as if you've scribbled over it.

And his expression looks very pained. Maybe colour would make it more understandable.
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