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Death by Cricket



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Fri Oct 28, 2005 4:21 pm
Poppi says...



All the crap written in the b/g is my poem martyr of banality which is a bit banal but if you're bored it's in the dramatic poem section...

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Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:43 am
electricbluemonkey says...



Its...its...what is it?
Gotta a find a woman be good to me,
Who won't hide my liquor, try to serve me tea.
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 7:46 am
Jennafina says...



I like this alot. I can't tell what its saying, but the words look very dramatic in the background. I also like how the colors alrernate from spots of pure white to spots of pure black.

Let me guess. Made on microsoft paint? Not appleworks.. Too big, I think.

With the spray brush?

Anyway, very nice work. :)
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 8:20 am
Poppi says...



No actually your wrong... I made an origional which was of me waving a bleeding heart and a cricket bat around in front of a mosque with loads of suidical words in the background (might post it once my scanner fixes). Scanned it into paint and fuzzed up the colour. Veeeery hard work I must say.... not....

Well thanks guys! Glad you like it :D
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 10:35 am
Twinkling Starz says...



It's nice. I don't know why, but nice.
*~*Shining through the dark black night...Twinkling Starz*~*
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 10:45 am
Poppi says...



mwahaha... that is what you think... until you read the poem... *rubs hands*
but thanks!
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:32 pm
Twinkling Starz says...



Em, I read it, and I still thinks its nice...
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 7:10 pm
Poppi says...



Cool! Thank you so much! It's kind of how I expected London to look. Big Ben rising out of the smog - HOW DISAPPOINTED WAS I?!
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 7:18 pm
Sophie says...



I've seen the real thing!!! I'm better than you all!!!!!
Oh the trees!
Take me back to London please!!!
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 7:35 pm
Poppi says...



I MADE the real thing! hah. HAH. HAAAAAAAAAH. *pokes with stick*
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...
  





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Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:39 pm
Gwenevire says...



I can't see it!
:cry:
  








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