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Fri Oct 21, 2005 2:46 pm
Jennafina says...



Ok this one sucks. You can't tell if the eyes are open, her nose looks hookish when I was to make it look like she was looking down, and the costume overpowers everything when its colored. Help me fix it?

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Fri Oct 21, 2005 2:55 pm
Nefer says...



I can see you really tried with this.

When I look at the first one it makes me think the fairy is saying "Oh no! I'm naked!" It's just the way her arms are crossed!

I like the coloured version, especially her wings! :D





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Sun Oct 23, 2005 2:13 am
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Thanks Nef. Anyone else? ^_^
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Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:26 pm
Fireweed says...



I think it's cute, but maybe you got just a wee bit carried away. There's just too much stuff that distracts from the fairy's beauty, like the crown is a little on the big side, and perhaps it could do without the crystal ball. I can tell that her eyes are closed, but if you wanted to make it more clear,you could take the hair out of her face.But actually don't do that. Her hair's pretty like that, even though its in her eyes.

I love her dress. It's cool how its cut a little bit asymmetrically on the bottom and on the neckline- very unique. I prefer the colored version because it's more defined and easier to look at. It also seems more complete because it doesn't have all the little sketchy lines that the first one does. I agree with nef that the wings are awesome.

Overall Jenna, this is really nice. You are a rockin' artist, keep posting your stuff!! :D
Last edited by Fireweed on Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:32 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 3:44 pm
Nox says...



^ Ditto!

Nice work Jen. :D
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Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:40 pm
Gwenevire says...



Whey can't I see them?





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Wed Dec 12, 2007 2:08 am
M.B.Author says...



I have to agrree with the last crit. I cannot see them I tried clicking on them, going back and reopening it and everything. Maybe you could repost this to show it again. Think about it.

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Wed Dec 12, 2007 3:25 am
Jennafina says...



It's pretty old, and I have no idea how to get the images to work. I'm just going to lock it. Thanks for the critiques, everybody!
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