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Light That Never Goes Out



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Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:17 pm
bulletproof says...



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Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:37 pm
Elizabeth says...



I see... hmm... I like the branching out of whatever it is... and.... yeah... there is pink in it though (>.<) And although I look good in pink it's kinda hard to look at...

Why isn't there any yellow or orange like fire... bwahahahahahahahahahahaa.

And somehow it's true... it's nice... But no fair, Alex prolly helped you scan
  





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Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:57 pm
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Anything to do with The Smiths? Probably not.
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:58 pm
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that was a good movie...
Got YWS? I do.

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Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:10 pm
Lollipop says...



hey thats quite pwetty!!
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:17 pm
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YAY! I helped scan! :P
  





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Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:55 pm
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that was a good movie...


Movie? oh...

No, I was talking about the band.
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:51 pm
Bobo says...



Hey, could you do a friend a favor and rotate that picture 90 degrees counterclockwise? Just open the picture in any image program, go to Edit or Modify or something like that, select Rotate from the menu, and click Rotate 90 Degrees Counterclockwise.

Now, that aside, pretty cool pic. I like the pink and blue.
  





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Mon Nov 12, 2007 10:53 pm
Kim says...



i really like your branches and choice of color.
good job.

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Sun Nov 18, 2007 3:01 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



Ooh, the colours are cool :) This is good.

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Sun Nov 18, 2007 3:06 pm
Via says...



The colors are good choices, I think. The branching out-ness is also pretty exciting.

I would redo the writing though, make it straighter and more one-size and style.

And then possibly fill in the white with a yellow or orange or something?
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Sun Nov 18, 2007 3:20 pm
Gwenevire says...



Its nice but.... I think you could have worked a little harder on it.
Maybe make the words more clear and try colouring everything in a little more thoroughly.

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Mon Nov 19, 2007 7:52 am
HybridHead says...



=.="

Stick to writing, would ya? :wink:

No, seriously.
  





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Mon Nov 19, 2007 2:37 pm
Alteran says...



Good grief talk about digging up an ancient topic. I like the colours, but it is very doodleish. It's awfully empty, the positive and negative spaces aren't balanced.
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Tue Nov 27, 2007 11:13 pm
my_wonderwall says...



not the best i've seen. it actually looks like something that i would draw when im mad or upset.
  








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