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Wed Apr 02, 2008 8:49 pm
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Wed Apr 02, 2008 11:29 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



Ow flowers!!! :smt038
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Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:22 am
Sohini says...



the bamboo leaf is great.

And I want the smiling dolphin.Now!
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Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:41 pm
blacktiger3915 says...



I love dolphins!!!!!!!!! Pretty flowers. I wish I can take photos like that. :( Anyway, great job! :D How's that man?
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Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:56 pm
Archstormangel says...



No offense, but the only one I really like is the treetops. I mean, you're not bad, but the images come off as amatureish, like you're depending too much on photoshop and picasso to make it took interesting.

For example, the shots are boring, anyonecandoit poses. #2 is too grainy, #4 looks like a bad quality picture, and #3 has too many bright spots - if you wanted to really make an affect, you made dullen the leaves in the back and emphasize the one up front, to give it some kapow.

Sorry ^^,
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Thu Apr 03, 2008 11:51 pm
Ash says...



Wow! These are great, I LOVE the dolphin! Keep up the great work.
  





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Fri Apr 04, 2008 2:16 pm
Azila says...



Hiya, Mays!

1. Interesting idea, but very amaturely done.

2. Melikey! Although I think it would have been better if you'd made the background blacker--in contrast to the flower.

3. I RELLY like this one. I love the pitch black background and vibrant leaves. Very good job! :smt023

4. Very cool. I love dolphins. At first I thought you'd taken it underwater, but then I realized that I can see a bit of reflection on the glass... you might want to edit that out of there?

5. I like it, but the background seems a bit busy. If I were you, I'd lower the dontrast back there and brighten up the flower.

6. I love the colors! At first I didn't like that the fern was cutting off part of it, but now I do--it adds dimension.

7. This feels kind of dull to me. What are those things in the tree? plastic bags? :shock:

8. Very interesting. I like the effect... I think. :lol:

I hope this helps somewhat!
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:10 pm
Mortality says...



I really like photography, and i love your style.
Their all very good, i didn't really like the first one, looked kind of random.

The bamboo is my favorite, its cool how i can see the little droplet of water on the leaf.
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Sat Apr 05, 2008 8:49 pm
eternal says...



Number 5 was great. I felt it was prettier and different than most flower shots.
  








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