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Sat Mar 29, 2008 11:07 pm
Bella says...



So this morning I started thinking...and looking at my nice, semi-clean desk...

And BAM! The idea hit me -- I started piling up my notebooks and stuff, along with my prized possession, that small stone. It turned out like this:

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So, what'cha think?

~Bella Bambini~
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Sat Mar 29, 2008 11:23 pm
mirandamaddness says...



I like it...

It tells me a creative writing and drawing mind lives in this space and isn't afraid to get messy...

I hope you know what I mean...

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Sat Mar 29, 2008 11:40 pm
Sleeping Valor says...



I love your stuff. I also love the picture. :D Three thumbs up!
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Sat Mar 29, 2008 11:50 pm
day tripper says...



I really like it!
It reminds me of this a lot:
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I love it.(:
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 1:11 am
Maybe says...



Very artistic, and really pretty. I love the book. Probably my favorite part of the whole picture. My only suggestion would probably be to crop out or just make sure the little things off to the side aren't there. It drew my attention away from the main focus of the picture and made me wonder...is that a phone or an alarm clock...or something else?

But this is great, Bella! I really, really like it, and I'm not just saying that as a friend. It truly is a gorgeous picture.
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 3:03 am
yoha_ahoy says...



Yeah, I'd crop it so all the distracting stuff on the sides are gone. But I love how everything looks so silvery and shiny! ^_^ And I love, love, LOVE those V5 Precise pens. They are the best pens ever! I always have on on my person, then about ten more in various bags and coat pockets at school. :D

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Sun Mar 30, 2008 3:12 am
sokool15 says...



Hey, there! I really love this picture - it makes me want to go be creative!

I think your glasses are really cool, too. I was cursed with unhappy glasses for a long time, and the ones I have now are kind of like those pictured. One question: what is that little blobby thing just below the glasses? It's cute, dont' get me wrong, but is it a button, or part of the notebook?

I like the modern look of the pencils and notebooks, contrasted with the slightly 'ancient tome' look of the thicker book. Great picture! :)

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Sun Mar 30, 2008 3:15 am
Bella says...



Thanks for all your comments guys!

I'm still working on how to crop and everything, but hopefully i'll get that figured out soon.

YoYo -- I love those pens too!! I have a bunch of them!

SoKool -- That little blobby thing is probably one of my most prized possessions. All it really is is a plastic stone with a clay angel inside, but it means the world to me. Someone I really care about gave it to me, and it belonged to his mom who passed away when he was nine. It never leaves my person (always left pocket), and i thought it oughtta be in a picture that had all my favorite things in it.

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Tue Apr 01, 2008 9:58 pm
Blue Fairy says...



I love this picture it's really creative and nice

The notebooks are really pretty and that little stone thing is cute. ^_^
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:06 pm
Mortality says...



Its really very good, but slightly too messy?
So messy its distracting, also its too dark.
Good job thou, its very nice.
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2008 8:44 pm
eternal says...



Actually, I disagree with previous users about cropping the pic. to get rid of the side things. I think that's what makes the picture, in fact, I'd like to see more. And more messy and less set.

Good job :)
  





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Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:47 am
Ash says...



This is cool....buts it kinda looks like a mess. But its still pretty cool. :)
  








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