um to be honest, this is nothing too great. I mean it's not badly drawn or anything. But I can see you have a steady hand so keep practicing.
Good luck
icy.
I'm a godmother, that's a great thing to be, a godmother. She calls me god for short, that's cute, I taught her that. --Ellen DeGeneres
It's pretty cute, though the quality of the scan is bad.
Also, when drawing try not to draw on lined paper unless it's just a little doodle or something, which i don't think this is since you're saying it's a first attempt.
It is cute. It's pretty good for a few attempted. Just keep practicing and you'll get it adventually. Also, the background--even if it isn't much--is pretty good. >> I suck at backgrounds myself XD lol.
Its OK keep going at it. Maybe either less detail or more detail. Not both though. I can't decide if it looks to cartoony or to real. Make it one or the other.
The computer is very small and the room is sparsely equipped. The person isn't all that bad (although I always get a little disoriented with cat people; they give me the creeps.)
The room lacks a lot of depth though, so it looks... flat. If you draw it inside a cube, then maybe it will make it easier to deal with.
There is nothing special in my mind, but its really good. The scanning didn't turn out that good though.
Good job,
~Fire
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