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Sun Mar 02, 2008 8:43 pm
little.angelfire says...



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So this is a coverpage I thought up. I haven't figured out a good background for it, and I'm not a huge fan of how the two girls (in the smaller, full body form) turned out in the middle.

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I'm just proud of how the boy actually looks like a boy ^.^

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Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:35 am
Azila says...



These are cool.

I like the relaxed, simple style and for the most part the proportions seem to be pretty on.

Elizabeth's face is a little strange-looking. I think her back cheek shouldn't be showing, it makes her face look a little too flat.

Also, in the second picture, the girl's left (raised) hand looks a little clunky...

Other than that, nice!
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Mon Mar 03, 2008 9:20 pm
Blue Fairy says...



These are really nice and simple.

I like the boy. Most people find it harder to draw boys :D


I also like the detail on the clothes on the first picture.

well done :)
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Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:36 pm
Rock n' Roll Queen says...



These are awesome. I absolutely love the guy, he looks so relaxed. You are really good :)
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Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:39 pm
Emerson says...



I love the second one a lot! In the first one, their faces look too wide. Try making them more round, maybe?

I'm no help with art though, heh, I can't do any of it!
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Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:33 pm
Sweeney_Todd says...



ooh...cute guy. It's *really* hard for me to draw guys, I usually make them too curvy and they look like girls, so I'm sad to say I'm a tad jealous. I love the chick's shirt in the second picture though.

Nice job.

(And don't feel too bad about that comment, my hand drawings look chunky and mishapen too... )
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Sat Mar 22, 2008 11:26 am
Loose says...



I love picture 2 and I am so jealous of your drawing abilities.
  





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Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:25 pm
Kadie says...



Yeah, i really like the clothes in the first one, though the face shape is a little wierd.

I love the pose of the guy in the second. It's just so typically male lol.

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