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Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:26 am
Via says...



Just a few pictures I took and suddenly fell in love with...

Chase
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Creek Mountain
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Eclipse (remember this is with a tiny digital camera...I kind of liked the star around it).
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Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:38 am
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I like the first the most. No comments on how to improve it.

The moon...>_> I shall not forgive you for somehow managing to take a picture of the moon. >.< It's so hard! What camera were you using???

The fourth was very interesting, though a little fuzzy I'm not sure it was that intentional. =P It's growing on me.

*hugs the first one* XD So awesome!
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Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:14 am
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Yo yo yo Yoda! Woo obscure Weird Al references. Heh. xD

Anyway... the second one is definitely my favourite. But seriously, how the blazes do you live in conditions that cold? Snow = holy crap keep it away from me.

*cough* Anyway...

I'm fascinated by photographs of water and creeks for one reason or another. Probably because I rarely see them. But they're always alluring to me.

The first one is really pretty. I like the contrast of the frozen water and the trees that look all summery and whatnot. And aww. Cute dog. He's like, perfect show dog style fur. Is he going swimming? Lol. Silly thing. :D

Ah! The eclipse. I hunger for photos of the eclipse -- I missed it because there was a huge thunderstorm for the entire duration of it. It was really bizarre. It was like the storm rolled in just to obscure the eclipse. Yay mother nature.

That last one... I can kind of see your reflection. :P If it wasn't for the reflections, this would be a really good photo. Although I suppose you can't really control reflections? Meh.

Lovely photos. Me encanta. ^_^

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Tue Feb 26, 2008 12:56 pm
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The first two are pretty--and I want to steal your dog and snuggle him myself--and the photo of the eclipse is good, if somewhat blurry. None of them are quite as sharp as I'd like--especially the photo-booth--but they're all pretty fun, and have a lot of potential. Brava!
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Tue Feb 26, 2008 6:32 pm
Blue Fairy says...



These pictures are really nice:

the first: I love it. the ice looks so beautiful and that dog's cute.

creek mountain: it's so pretty and crowded with leaves.

The eclipse: I love the light coming off it.

Jason's phonebooth: funny

I love the first one the most :D
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Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:17 pm
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I love the first one. It is my fave. I like how the dog is off centered.

The second one looks like my cousins property. Which, we love to go up and be. It is very pretty = your picture.

third one, I saw that eclipse, I have a picture just like that one at home. You got it so up close. Kudos!

Fourth one, kinda creepy and bad. I was disappointed to see all those amazing nature photos, then that one.

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Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:56 am
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like everyone else has said, you're first one is amazing! i love it!

and yeah, lucky for being able to take a picture of the moon, thats awesome.

and the third one is just great. he looks so funny, like a model on candid camera- and im digging the hat!

do you take pictures in black&white? i think the first one would look good like that.

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Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:25 pm
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These are great! I especially love the first one. The only thing is the eclipse is a bit "unclear" I tried taking pictures that night and they turned out horrible. Yours is alot better. Keep up the good work!!
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Fri Mar 14, 2008 6:09 pm
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The first one is good. Its just white and then there is the green and the blue to 'break' the white.
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Fri Mar 14, 2008 7:05 pm
Kadie says...



The first one is absolutely gorgeous. The colours could probably do with a little bit of a play around, but other than that, excellent picture!
  





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Fri Mar 28, 2008 12:48 pm
Loose says...



I loved the first one.

The colour of the dog really stood out amongst the colour of the water.

The others didn't take my fancy, but that's just a personal opinion.
  





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Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:54 pm
KJ says...



Hey. I thought that the last two were pretty decent, and I don't know how you can improve them.

As to the first, I liked it, but I think it would be better without the leash. It would make it more natural and give the dog a seeming of freedom. Just a thought.

As to the second, as someone else said, would be better if it was sharper.

Otherwise, they're interesting.
  





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Fri Mar 28, 2008 9:02 pm
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The first one is amazing.
I've taken a similar picture
like that, well, not around water
but it was winter time and my dog
was in it.
But I really like it.
It looks like it was fun to take(:
A little less inhuman.
A little more brutal.
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Tue Apr 01, 2008 10:11 pm
Archstormangel says...



I love the last one. Poor guys looks stuck.

xD

I love the ice water. I've never see nthat around here - it's gorgeous! And the dog looks gorgeous, too.

And

Um

Maybe you can photoshop the leash out? Dunno, it's bothering me.
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Tue Apr 01, 2008 10:22 pm
GryphonFledgling says...



I definitely liked the first and fourth the best. They both had such interesting subject matter. The fourth is a bit fuzzy and the reflection didn't do anything for it, but it was just so interesting. Made me wonder what he was doing and so on and so forth. Inspiring stuff that. The rest were great as well, but those two are the ones that jumped out at me.

Very nice work. :D

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