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Aedomir



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Fri Feb 08, 2008 6:34 pm
Aedomir says...



I'm sorry, my friend got onto my profile and messed about with my stuff
Last edited by Aedomir on Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
  





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Fri Feb 08, 2008 6:51 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



its ok......
"Hello, is this thing on?"
  





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Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:16 pm
Aedomir says...



Ye its a bit crap I know :-D

Anyhow, I just added a bow and arrow. I think I will scrap it and make another some other time lol
Last edited by Aedomir on Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
  





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Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:44 pm
Via says...



It's okay. It's not horrible for what it is but it's not spectacular for what it isn't, either. Yea...that made no sense. I'm kind of at a bit of a loss because I'm not sure what kind of character this story portraits: is it cartoon, realistic, somewhere in the middle? No one knows. I think we need more detail on this picture before a real critique can be given.
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Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:39 am
Alteran says...



Did you remove it? I can't see it.
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:58 am
MidnightVampire says...



hmmm... neither can I. So it's not just your computer (either that or we just have really sucky computers.. I know mine is...)
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)
  





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Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:22 am
Firearris says...



It's okay! I suggest that if you haven't already, change your password to something that your friends wouldn't know, Pronto!


Adam and Vampire: It is removed. :) Otherwise you would see that little symbol. (That I forgot the name of. :D)


Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  








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