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Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:41 am
Gwenevire says...



You know the movie The Matrix?
Well this is Neo, Trinity and Morphious.
I got the original picture off of the internet then I edited it.
What do you think?
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Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:33 am
Via says...



Hey Gwen.

It's pretty cool, but I'd suggest keeping the outlines of the heads and such things that are rather important lol.

But I like the weird view we are getting here, and the fact that neo's glasses have no ear pieces, they are just stuck to his face ;)
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Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:39 am
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Thanks [s]Suz[/s] Via XD
Well actually Morpheous's glasses are the ones that are supposed to not have the ear pieces XD
But it looks as if Neo does to :P
What do you mean the outlines of the heads? I got 'em *points*
Oh I see XD
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Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:17 am
Jennafina says...



Wow! This is really interesting! Which program did you use to edit it?

I like the contrast between the white and the black. I also like how the figures aren't outlined against the background (Morpheus's bald head disappearing into nothing is cool, lol.)

If you were going to change anything, I think it would be better if all the lines were the same sharpness. There are some really soft lines like the shading on Neo's face, but then there are also some really sharp ones, like the left side of Trinity's hair and her sleeve.

Thanks for posting this! It looks like Matrix Wallpaper.
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Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:34 am
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Thanks =]
I used iPhoto and fireworks.
I agree with the sharpness. I will work on that :D
  





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Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:36 am
scotty.knows says...



Excellent all in all, it looks kind of like the latest Rambo T-shirt.

Sorry... I just couldn't get a critique out without a reference to Rambo...

It is a little smudged, but that's the only thing that really bothered me.
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What's Rambo?
Yes, its supposed to be smudged XD
  





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Tue Feb 05, 2008 4:37 pm
cat4prowl says...



If this was a t-shirt, I'd buy it and wear it all over. Haha.

The only thing I noticed was that Trinity looks rather unrecognizable. I don't know why. Her face is too undefined maybe?

Overall, this is awesome. Two thumbs up!
  





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Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:57 am
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T-shirt...! Ah good idea! I am going to get it printed onto a t-shirt!
Thanks Cat!
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Trinity is trying to look sexy I think :P
  





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Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:37 am
Myth says...



I like it. Two things to point out: Trinity's lips look odd and it seems you cut Neo out of another picture since his right side doesn't blend with Morpheus's clothes.
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Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:44 pm
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Triniy is pusing her lips back to make them look big.
Well Morfeouse is kinda behind neo. Its weird I know :P
  








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